Fic: "Just One More Time," Inception, Cobb/Nash, NC-17

[_beetle_]

I've got other shit to do. I have to stop looking at the kink meme and learn to prioritize.

Just One More Time
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[forgerness]

Wow, this was so different than expected from the prompt. I thought it would be cracky or something, but this, to me, was actually a bit creepy. Nash takes it, but Cobb's attitude is what makes it really creepy. Especially here:

“I meant get off me, jerk! I said no, and I meant it!”

“And I said yes.”

“No.” Nash sighs when Dom nods yes, pushing at Dom’s chest again, for-real annoyed, this time. “Damnit, Dominic-“

Dom tackles Nash to the bed, pinning Nash’s body with his own, and Nash’s hands with his own. All without breaking gazes.

“Yes,” he says lowly, leaning in to lick a stripe up Nash’s throat.

I loved the interactions between them. Your Cobb is so powerful and controlling. It's just that Cobb will never take no for an answer, and it's not really rape, but it's like Cobb forces Nash to say yes or take it. I feel bad for Nash here. ):

I thought this was a funny line: "Well beyond morning wood, this is a hard-on that means business." Still, in the context, it had me a little scared for Nash. Why is Cobb so forceful, huh? =P And this: "...his cock is painfully over-sensitized and probably starting to chafe at this point. Not that Dom knows or would care if he did..." You are good at showing Cobb's character throughout the piece. This is such a different Cobb than I have ever seen and I liked the piece.