Stranded, Chapter 2

Dec 15, 2011 07:41

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

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on_the_ground December 15 2011, 00:28:37 UTC
Another awesome chapter! This story is totally addictive even if especially Reid going through this breaks my heart. Love your writing as usual. Thank you! ;)

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 00:03:49 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! Happy you're enjoying it! :)

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moonchilddj December 15 2011, 00:29:31 UTC
Ooooh, and now the fun begins! *cackling madly*

Dear me, I love the sexual tension in this fic. <3 I remember that shoving match at the Lilypad so well, it was my favorite part of their growing relationship, and you keyed into it so well! I also loved the part where Luke caught Reid at the waterfall...what a beautiful mental image for your readers! I know I'm going to savor it! I love that tension between them...that'll always be a part of Luke and Reid, it had been how they started, and they had such a delicious friction, from eyes, to fingers, to looks, without even touching. Love this to death ( ... )

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 00:05:51 UTC
Eeee, thank you so much for this wonderful feedback! :D

So glad you enjoyed the flashback to the shoving match. They were so hot there, guh! Also good to hear the tension between them is coming off well, and that you enjoyed the glimpses into Reid's past. Yay!

Thanks again! Chapter 3 is up! :)

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oh_amelia December 15 2011, 00:47:19 UTC
Oh, I feel so bad for Reid. But I love the angsty stuff. Though, I'm excited for when Luke starts giving into his attraction to Reid and all that.

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 00:06:17 UTC
Yeah, poor Reid. :( Thank you, bb!

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 00:06:29 UTC
Aww, thank you! :)

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mech_bull December 15 2011, 01:53:05 UTC
"Edward? That's a … serious name for a baby."
Reid gives an exaggerated shudder. "Yeah, well, when it turned out he didn’t sparkle, just cried and pooped a lot, they started to call him Eddie instead."
"He didn’t sparkle? Am I supposed to understand that?"
"Never mind. It was a movie. Or a book. I don’t know. Your sister has terrible taste, and her kid is a brat."
Hahahahahahaha. Ha.

Great chapter. So many fun, amazing, angsty moments, I don't even know where to start!

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_alicesprings December 16 2011, 00:06:47 UTC
Aww, thanks! Happy you're enjoying it! :)

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