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Brownies

Apr 06, 2010 00:22

Title: Brownies
Author: silver_sixpence
Rating: PG-13
Parings: Vam
Disclaimer: Fiction. Not real.
Summary: Part of the Vam Food Challenge
Author: I love brownies, and after someone gave me a new recipe I had to write this. And thanks calvaryscars for helping me when I was stuck in a rut. ;)

( Warm chocolate filled the back of his throat, wrapping around his teeth and invading his senses. )

fic:one-shot, genre:angst, rating:pg-13, genre:drabble, author:s

Comments 11

lillithvalo April 6 2010, 04:57:59 UTC

Awe...
Way to cute hun.

asilversixpence April 6 2010, 22:18:36 UTC

Thankies. (And BTW, your request will be finished shortly! :))

kymburrlee April 6 2010, 05:17:15 UTC

Very nice!
Sweet and sexy.

Sorry I'm not very articulate right now. I prefer leaving longer comments. :( I really enjoyed this, though.

asilversixpence April 6 2010, 22:20:46 UTC

Sweet and sad.

Don't worry, I'm just glad you left a response. I like to know how I'm doing.

poisonxangel April 6 2010, 12:37:28 UTC

8D
blood and brownies... omg. perfect. beautiful! i loved it! :D

asilversixpence April 6 2010, 22:22:50 UTC

Hahah, blood and chocolate. After I wrote that I thought it was so cliche, but it fit Ville's foul mood, so I left it. (There's actually a book called Blood and Chocolate by Annette Curtis Klause but that is a completely different story.)

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asilversixpence April 6 2010, 22:23:07 UTC

I <3 Brownies! ;D

calvaryscars April 6 2010, 13:41:10 UTC

The odd combination of blood and chocolate complemented each other as they melted on his tongue, the perfect melody of flavors sending his nerves into a disordered frenzy.

( ... )

asilversixpence April 6 2010, 22:25:18 UTC

Umm, hello? Do you not remember helping me come up with that exact sentence? (Insert 'O RLY?' gif here.)

ladytron April 6 2010, 22:54:07 UTC

WELL DUH. NO WONDER IT'S SO FREAKING AMAZING.

...I KID.

No, seriously, maybe I helped you come up with the idea, but you came up with the beautiful pattern of words and flavors ;) And the whole story is delish dude. I love it.