New Fiction
Name: The 13th Step
Chapter One: The Package
Rating: At the moment i would say its a PG but it will get smuttyer i promise :D
Summary: A fiction based on the album by A Perfect Circle called The 13th Step but just because its based on it doesn't mean its ganna have lyrics and junk in it lol
Charactors: Bam, Ville and other people who will pop up later
Disclamer: I own this story, but thats all, nothing else :D
3:36am the clock blinked dimly though the dark room. Bam pulled himself up, being careful not to wake the sleeping person next to him and slipped out of bed. He tip-toed over to the window and looked out just in time to see a dark figure flick a cigarette out on to the pavement from the shadows. He smiled slightly to himself before pulling on a pair of baggy jeans; he froze as the person in his bed stirred then rolled over falling asleep again. He stayed where he was for a few more seconds to make sure they were asleep before he snuck out of the room and down towards the front door.
He stepped out into the cold night air whist trying to fish a packet of Marlboro out of his pocket and just as he lit one up a man stepped out from the shadows, He took the cigarette from Bam and inhaled deeply.
“I never thought she would fall asleep” he growled letting the smoke drift from his mouth.
“She said she felt uneasy but then again I guess she has reason to be” he replied quietly, almost as if he felt sorry
for her.
Before he could say anything else the man with the cigarette had pulled him closer and started kissing his neck. Bam’s eyes closed slowly as the mans hot breath danced over his neck making him shiver.
“Oh Ville” he whimpered. Ville bit down hard on his neck before taking Bam’s face in his hands and letting his tongue dance over his lips slowly.
“I’ve waited so long for this” Ville whispered “I’ve waited so long too be able to kiss you again and hold you and taste you” he finished his sentence in barely a growl.
“But now that I have you” he want on.
“I’m not letting you go, your to beautiful, to innocent, to pure for her, but not for me” he pulled back so he could look Bam strait in the eyes.
“I’m the opposite of everything you are and that’s what makes use so perfect together, I’m the evil, devious, manipulative, sadistic man that you will never be, but will always love” with this he kissed Bam lightly and took his hand.
“Just never forget that I love you more then she does” he started pulling him out onto the street and towards his apartment where they could be together in privet.
im interested in what people think of this, if i get no or bad feed back i wont carry it on. simple as :)
i also would like someone to Beta for me cos im rubbish at grammer and such
Chapter One: The Package
Rating: At the moment i would say its a PG but it will get smuttyer i promise :D
Summary: A fiction based on the album by A Perfect Circle called The 13th Step but just because its based on it doesn't mean its ganna have lyrics and junk in it lol
Charactors: Bam, Ville and other people who will pop up later
Disclamer: I own this story, but thats all, nothing else :D
3:36am the clock blinked dimly though the dark room. Bam pulled himself up, being careful not to wake the sleeping person next to him and slipped out of bed. He tip-toed over to the window and looked out just in time to see a dark figure flick a cigarette out on to the pavement from the shadows. He smiled slightly to himself before pulling on a pair of baggy jeans; he froze as the person in his bed stirred then rolled over falling asleep again. He stayed where he was for a few more seconds to make sure they were asleep before he snuck out of the room and down towards the front door.
He stepped out into the cold night air whist trying to fish a packet of Marlboro out of his pocket and just as he lit one up a man stepped out from the shadows, He took the cigarette from Bam and inhaled deeply.
“I never thought she would fall asleep” he growled letting the smoke drift from his mouth.
“She said she felt uneasy but then again I guess she has reason to be” he replied quietly, almost as if he felt sorry
for her.
Before he could say anything else the man with the cigarette had pulled him closer and started kissing his neck. Bam’s eyes closed slowly as the mans hot breath danced over his neck making him shiver.
“Oh Ville” he whimpered. Ville bit down hard on his neck before taking Bam’s face in his hands and letting his tongue dance over his lips slowly.
“I’ve waited so long for this” Ville whispered “I’ve waited so long too be able to kiss you again and hold you and taste you” he finished his sentence in barely a growl.
“But now that I have you” he want on.
“I’m not letting you go, your to beautiful, to innocent, to pure for her, but not for me” he pulled back so he could look Bam strait in the eyes.
“I’m the opposite of everything you are and that’s what makes use so perfect together, I’m the evil, devious, manipulative, sadistic man that you will never be, but will always love” with this he kissed Bam lightly and took his hand.
“Just never forget that I love you more then she does” he started pulling him out onto the street and towards his apartment where they could be together in privet.
im interested in what people think of this, if i get no or bad feed back i wont carry it on. simple as :)
i also would like someone to Beta for me cos im rubbish at grammer and such