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Fade In (Breathe Out)

Mar 21, 2007 00:43

Title: Fade In (Breathe Out)
Pairing: Mikey/Bob
POV: Third person
Rating: Oh-so-PG
Length: 860 words
Author's Note: For we_are_cities' 03/20/07 prompt
Disclaimer: Fiction ( Read more... )

bob, alicia, mikey, mcr

Comments 32

bohemianheathen March 21 2007, 08:47:44 UTC

beautiful. sad, but still wonderful :)

__more March 21 2007, 21:06:04 UTC

Thank you!

indie_wonka March 21 2007, 08:57:21 UTC

Aww. *sad sigh* It's very good.

I actually had the song from the prompt playing in the background while I read this. It made it sadder.

__more March 21 2007, 21:06:36 UTC

Is that song amazing or what? Love it.

Thanks!

astrocigarettes March 21 2007, 09:40:28 UTC

...and then she’ll smile at you when the kids are laughing and I promise you, I promise you I won’t even cross your mind.

This killed me.

And the whole piece is really poignant and lovely.

siry March 21 2007, 18:16:52 UTC

Aww, what a cutie icon! Bob's fabulous in it!

Oh yes, great fic! Nice & rare pairing.

__more March 21 2007, 21:18:03 UTC

Heyyy it's you!
Thanks very much. :-)

siry March 23 2007, 13:16:38 UTC

You remember me? If you do, then... wow, I'm honored!

I just read it again and it felt as powerful as it felt for the first time. I really liked that Mikey and Bob's relationship was so unnoticeable, so... quiet.

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seanarenay March 21 2007, 11:54:12 UTC

My heart just broke for both of them. Beautiful.

__more March 21 2007, 21:08:41 UTC

*mends your heart*

Thank you.

hanged_man March 21 2007, 13:22:40 UTC

Wow, this is well done, I love it and I feel sorry for the two of them

__more March 21 2007, 21:10:48 UTC

Dude, icon love.

Thank you!