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Fade In (Breathe Out)

Mar 21, 2007 00:43

Title: Fade In (Breathe Out)
Pairing: Mikey/Bob
POV: Third person
Rating: Oh-so-PG
Length: 860 words
Author's Note: For we_are_cities' 03/20/07 prompt
Disclaimer: Fiction ( Read more... )

bob, alicia, mikey, mcr

Comments 32

thisthought March 21 2007, 15:24:31 UTC

aww poor mikey aww bob... *cries in her little corner*

__more March 21 2007, 21:13:22 UTC

Oh, don't cry. *hug*

Thanks for the comment!

thisthought March 22 2007, 01:39:20 UTC

anytime! i know how much comment mean.

phillyword March 21 2007, 19:33:02 UTC

this was gorgeous and so sad.

and *is clueless* bob is from chicago? what's up with chicago? does that city just breed boys who start as techs and then end up taking over in bands? (see also: jon walker)

__more March 21 2007, 21:17:11 UTC

Okay. Three things.

1) Your icon? Is made of win.
2) Bob is indeed from Chicago. And I do think there's something in Chicago's water that makes these boys who are just...oh my.
3) Thank you so much, sweetheart!

phillyword March 21 2007, 22:24:28 UTC

1. thank YOU! :)
2. seriously, chicago is a cute/talented boy mecca. i need to plan a trip...hm....
3. you are more than welcome.

decimatedreams March 21 2007, 23:58:13 UTC

This: I promise you, I promise you I won’t even cross your mind.
and this: there is an empty chair where everyone knows Bob should be

Effing slayed me. This is such an amazing piece. It's tragic yet a little bittersweet at the same time. Absolutely beautiful.
+mems<33

__more March 22 2007, 00:24:51 UTC

Thank you so very much!

fuckbella March 22 2007, 01:32:25 UTC

You're the Frank/Gerard girl! The one who made me like a Frank/Gerard.

But besides that, you're an amazing writer. You just get the feelings of being trapped without being completely overdramatic. And Bob, just, fuck. He's so righteous and good and selfless and kinda selfish too. But it works and I love it.

Definitely memoried.

__more March 22 2007, 06:47:33 UTC

Haha! I win. :-)

Bob was actually the last MCR guy I ever tried to write. He has this intangible quality that I was so scared of getting wrong, so I'm glad you like him.

Thank you!

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__more March 22 2007, 06:56:59 UTC

I try not to make the girlfriends bitches when I use them. I just don't think they deserve that.

And you! You wrote Traumatism which is one of my favorite things ever. *love*

Thank you kindly.