Title: Fitzcarraldo Pairing: Frank/Gerard POV: Third person Rating: PG Length: 400 words Author's Note: For we_are_citiesDec. 26th prompt and also slightly inspired by "Fitzcarraldo" by The Frames. Disclaimer: Fiction
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*heartflutter* Nothing but oodles of pure lovely. And ooh cos it linked perfectly to the prompt, and it was glittery and rain-filled and real. Godyou'regood.
Okay, so for some reason completely beyond me, I clicked the link.
I really do not like Frank/Gerard. But for some reason, this was enough to make me forget that I never liked them together.
Just, the writing and everything. All the feelings and the metaphors that made sense and related everything back to what had happened.
but Frank knew they were lies because there is close and there is together and they had been together long enough for Frank to separate fact from fiction
I really really love that line. I really love this whole thing.
So I think the best way to start this comment is by saying how much I adore everything that you write. I really wish I knew how to explain my fascination with your stories. They're just so short and simple, but they're really powerful at the same time. And I really do feel like I'm babbling, so I think I'll stop now. :D &heartz;
Oh my. That was lovely. The language was amazing, as were the metaphors, and it just worked. It kind of gave me the chills. *shudder* And I love the last line.
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*heartflutter*
Nothing but oodles of pure lovely.
And ooh cos it linked perfectly to the prompt, and it was glittery and rain-filled and real.
Godyou'regood.
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I really do not like Frank/Gerard. But for some reason, this was enough to make me forget that I never liked them together.
Just, the writing and everything. All the feelings and the metaphors that made sense and related everything back to what had happened.
but Frank knew they were lies because there is close and there is together and they had been together long enough for Frank to separate fact from fiction
I really really love that line. I really love this whole thing.
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I really wish I knew how to explain my fascination with your stories.
They're just so short and simple, but they're really powerful at the same time.
And I really do feel like I'm babbling, so I think I'll stop now.
:D
&heartz;
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And every time I see your username, I think, "Feeshies go pook pook pook." Just so you know.
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