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Fitzcarraldo

Dec 28, 2006 00:29

Title: Fitzcarraldo
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
POV: Third person
Rating: PG
Length: 400 words
Author's Note: For we_are_cities Dec. 26th prompt and also slightly inspired by "Fitzcarraldo" by The Frames.
Disclaimer: Fiction ( Read more... )

gerard, frank, mcr

Comments 16

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__more December 28 2006, 18:07:13 UTC

Not pathetic at all, my dear. Your comment actually made my whole morning.

x_bluesoulsmoke December 28 2006, 18:42:24 UTC

Oh, oh.

*heartflutter*
Nothing but oodles of pure lovely.
And ooh cos it linked perfectly to the prompt, and it was glittery and rain-filled and real.
Godyou'regood.

__more December 28 2006, 20:20:00 UTC

Haha, thank you very much!

fuckbella December 28 2006, 22:58:42 UTC

Okay, so for some reason completely beyond me, I clicked the link.

I really do not like Frank/Gerard. But for some reason, this was enough to make me forget that I never liked them together.

Just, the writing and everything. All the feelings and the metaphors that made sense and related everything back to what had happened.

but Frank knew they were lies because there is close and there is together and they had been together long enough for Frank to separate fact from fiction

I really really love that line. I really love this whole thing.

fuckbella December 28 2006, 22:59:05 UTC

Also, I need to make a Frank/Gerard categorie in my memories just for this.

fuckbella December 28 2006, 22:59:15 UTC

category*

__more December 29 2006, 00:48:14 UTC

Oh my. Thank you so very, very much. I really appreciate your comment. You've made me all giddy and happy now.

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feeshy December 29 2006, 03:47:33 UTC

So I think the best way to start this comment is by saying how much I adore everything that you write.
I really wish I knew how to explain my fascination with your stories.
They're just so short and simple, but they're really powerful at the same time.
And I really do feel like I'm babbling, so I think I'll stop now.
:D
&heartz;

__more December 30 2006, 06:50:58 UTC

Seriously, babble comments are the best. Thank you so much.

And every time I see your username, I think, "Feeshies go pook pook pook." Just so you know.

periculosa December 29 2006, 06:06:22 UTC

Oh my. That was lovely. The language was amazing, as were the metaphors, and it just worked. It kind of gave me the chills. *shudder* And I love the last line.

__more December 30 2006, 06:51:55 UTC

Thank you!