Blackbird Fly

Sep 06, 2009 19:44

Title: Blackbird Fly
Author: ___set_thespark
Pairing: Cookleta
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1,275
Author's Notes: This is my first try at Cookleta, so we'll see what happens. No beta, so all mistakes are mine.
Disclaimer: This isn't real life... at all.

You were only waiting for this moment to arrive )

pairing: cookleta, verse: blackbird, fic

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nieliegen September 7 2009, 00:10:34 UTC
OOMMMMMMMGGGG! THIS IS SO SWEET.

I am so glad you got around to finishing it! I loved it, great job bb!

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___set_thespark September 7 2009, 00:12:58 UTC
Thank you!! I was aiming for something fluffy... because I don't do serious very well, haha.
:)

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hpnut3239 September 7 2009, 00:12:02 UTC
Wow, this was so awesome! The ending (okay, all of it) was so cutee! I'm really happy you finished it :)

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___set_thespark September 7 2009, 00:14:53 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to read it, haha!

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asmallsmackerel September 7 2009, 00:13:50 UTC
This is pure brilliance. <3333 I love it, lots and lots.

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___set_thespark September 7 2009, 00:15:15 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad people like it!
:)

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mellowdee September 7 2009, 00:24:26 UTC
OMGAAAAH.

I AM ONLY GOING TO COMMENT ON THE LAST PART BC I'VE ALREADY FLAILED ENOUGH FOR THE FIRST 3!!

Cook looks for Archie and is a little disappointed when he doesn't see him,

I can imagine the dejected look on his face!! Oh Cook. Why so sweet.

so Cook decides to sit around and wait because it couldn't hurt (and Archie is his kindred spirit, so he can do whatthefuckever he wants to do, thank you very much).

;ALKDSFJ;AFLJ!! I LOVE THE BIT IN THE () BC THIS MAKES COOK COOK. SAPPY BUT HE CAN DEFEND HIMSELF WITH RANDOM JUSTIFICATIONS AND CURSING. AND FOREVER AND EVER AT KINDRED SPIRITS!! ♥.

Hey Cook, it's Archie. I hope you're still here. My appt is over.

I LOVE THAT ARCHIE ACTUALLY TEXTED HIM RIGHT AWAY. LIKE. IT WASN'T JUST ONE-SIDED INTEREST FROM COOK. CLEARLY ARCHIE WAS ALSO LIKE 'HEY, LET'S BE BOYFRIENDS'. YAAAAAAAAAY.

Cook's heart is busy attempting to beat itself out of his chest while he rapidly types back to Archie: Of course! I'm back in our spot ~D.

ASKDJF;ALDKJF;AF. YOU USED ~D.

I OFFICIALLY LOVE YOU.

... )

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___set_thespark September 7 2009, 00:50:47 UTC
ETERT@$SWQE!!
Key smash for the second time.

Your comments today have been complete love, and I love your reactions to each part. They are epic and just all kinds of awesome, so I thank you for that. I am seriously smiling like a fool right now because of you, haha, and I doubt I would have finished the fic if you hadn't given me all the awesome feedback today. I also can't believe you added this to your memories. That's like an honor for me... because I am lame and sappy like Cook tries not to be. So I'm just going to continue to flail until time for the rewatch tonight. I'm also adding you to my lj friends because you are awesome.

(On a Cook/creepy note: I just noticed that you have a BS in Bio. That's awesome! I'm starting on my third year of getting a BS in Cell Bio because I want to go into genetics.)

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mellowdee September 7 2009, 06:33:36 UTC
OH YEAH!! When I saw that you were majoring in Bio, I was like HECK YEAH. BIO MAJORS!! ♥.

And that is amazing that you want to go into genetics!! That's some hardcore stuff right there! GOOOOODLUCK!! :D

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takemychance September 7 2009, 00:39:50 UTC
Ohmigosh, I loved this so, so much.

And OMG sequel yes plz!

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___set_thespark September 7 2009, 00:41:51 UTC
:DD
I already have some ideas, so we'll see!!

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