Lj Idol "Ghosts"

Oct 28, 2008 09:25


Yes, this is a true story.
It was the third grade and like every other third grade class since the beginnings of time, we were studying local history.  Our then home had a rich history, soaked in frontier trading, flushed in the Civil War, and with dashes of saucy tales.  Most of what we learned that year concerned our cities history with trading.  ( Read more... )

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tigrkittn October 28 2008, 16:19:15 UTC
This is a great story, and very vividly told! I love the way you did the closing.

While you've still got time to edit, there are a couple of typos I noticed: "improtant" at the end of the first paragraph and "no body's business".

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8673 October 28 2008, 16:21:35 UTC
Thank you. I will go off and correct right now.

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baxaphobia October 28 2008, 17:31:14 UTC
Wow! What an experience!

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8673 October 28 2008, 17:39:47 UTC
Yeah, it was. It's stuck with me for a long time now. Despite it all, I was sad to hear when development destroyed it. It wasn't scary to me. It was just sad.

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kajel October 28 2008, 18:52:45 UTC
Wow, great entry.

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8673 October 28 2008, 18:54:27 UTC
Thank you very much. It was never anything that frightened me (when it happened). It was always just sad.

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brightflashes October 28 2008, 20:02:42 UTC
Absolutely brilliant! Thanks so much for sharing this. Loved it! :)

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8673 October 28 2008, 21:33:06 UTC
Thank you very much.

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lilmissmagic71 October 28 2008, 21:44:16 UTC
Wow... very cool story. I felt something similar when going through the farmhouse at Grassmere... a coldness that was bone chilling...

You handled it very well considering you were so young... My young self would have freaked and made a ruckus... *grin*

Great entry... it carried me right along and I loved your descriptions...

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8673 October 29 2008, 00:13:19 UTC
Thank you very much. I'd like to thank some unknown stregnth for my reaction. But the truth is, by eight, I had never known a time without this sort of thing happening. I was four or so when I became aware that others weren't seeing what I was seeing. It's a family trait too. My mom sees her sisters, both gone, all the time. It was never scary to me that day, just sad, deeply deeply sad.

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