Ficlet: In Between the Lightning Flashes (Remus/Peter), PG

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Title: In Between the Lightning Flashes
Author: innerslytherin
Characters: Remus Lupin/Peter Pettigrew
Summary: When the Marauders have Order missions, Peter keeps vigil. One night, Remus joins him.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Notes: Thanks to my super-fast beta-reader, who knows who she is.

Comments

[sambethe]

I've never read (or, honestly, thought about) Remus/Peter before. However, this makes me wish there was more of it. They make a certain sort of sense and there is much potential to be had here.

Very much enjoyed!

[innerslytherin]

Thanks! I'd only written one Remus/Peter fic before this year, but I've been RPing Peter with a great Remus to play from, and we got the boys together in our game. It made me start thinking more about the ship, and now I'm addicted. :D

[celandineb]

Interesting notion! Made me think.

[innerslytherin]

Thanks! :)

[secretsolitaire]

Ouch, what a painful ending. I enjoyed this.

[innerslytherin]

Thanks! The only problem with having Peter as a favourite character is that he's pretty much always been guaranteed a painful ending. *sigh*

[opheliet]

Ouch! I'd never read this pairing before, but it definitely made sense here. I love stories that give Peter a real, complex personality, and this made me hurt for him. Oh boys. *hugs them all*

[innerslytherin]

Thanks! I've always thought there had to be a reason for Peter's betrayal, though it's painful to explore it. Glad you liked it! :)

[islandsmoke]

I love the story woven through the images of the lightening - or is it the other way around? And Remus and Peter... interesting idea. Well done!

[innerslytherin]

Thanks! I live in central Indiana, where it stormed virtually nonstop for a week (though I'm one of the fortunate people who didn't get flooded) so I had a lot of atmospheric inspiration for this fic! :) Remus/Peter is a fairly recent addiction for me.