Whispers and Promises VII

[79_percent]

Title: Whispers and Promises VII
Author: 79_percent
Rating: PG-13
Form: Chaptered
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: JaeHo
Genre: Drama, Fluff, Angst

Comments

[coconutjack]

oh my freakin...

SPOT! 8D

now for the comment: sdjkfndfioj jae freaked me out a bit. man this chapter made my skin crawl! what/who the heck is jae?? haha! i'm totally intrigued now but i'm loving this fic! :D

[coconutjack]

this passage is strengthening my theory/ies about the plot. 8D:

As he felt himself fall, two faces began to appear in his hazy vision; the first from his recent memory, the other from his past, one overlapping the other. They intertwined, mingling in such an intricate blend until they were completely superimposed on each other to finally form a face that he had loved with his heart all this while.

more pleeease! soon? ^^

[79_percent]

I think you're really tracking on the correct path. 8D I wil definitely try to! Revising the chapters really takes more time than I thought. I have exams next week :/ but I'll see what I can do. ^^

Thanks so much for reading! (:

[79_percent]

Ahaha, Jae does freak me out a little too. You know, I had initially wanted to make Jae even more evil than this. ^^;

[jongjin_jaeho]

wow.
So wonderfully written
It's sad
so emotional

[79_percent]

Thank you!

[79_percent]

I'm so so tempted to tell you what will happen in the last few chapters, but I really don't want to spoil it. ^^;

Thank you!! I used to write like this (about 2 years ago) and somehow I think my style changes quite a bit now. ^^;;;

[79_percent]

Yes! Let's keep it just like that now. I only hope you'll like how it turns out at the end. ^^

:D That's so sweet! Thank you! ^^ I'm glad you liked those (which ones did you read?). I have to say I don't write things like that anymore (though I'd love to) but I can't seem to emulate them anymore. ^^;; But oh well, I'll definitely continue writing as far possible, and as far as time permits. (:

[79_percent]

I personally liked that bit as well. I remember finding it so hard to drop hints about.. well, about what was about to happen in the later chapters but without being too blatantly obvious about it. ^^;

The next 2 chapters (which will actually be the end of this!) will answer your question. I'm really glad that you're enjoying this! ♥♥♥

Will definitely try to update asap. I'm a fuss when it comes to my own fics, so I'll take a bit of time revising the next parts. And I have exams next week. ): But I'll try to squeeze in some time! Thank you ^-^

p/s: This journal isn't friends-only, so none of the entries is f-locked. ^^ I friended you anyhow.

[chloe1910]

er, I'm not sure if I got it right..All along I suspect that the Jaejoong here is not human but I'm not sure just what? Is it that the real Jae(Yunho's Jae) died and er, transported himself here to meet His Yunho for last time or is it The Jae here is the ghost that has taken the form of Yunyo's Jae, to lure Yunho into the sea with him? Shudders, I don't know. Somehow, there's something not right, cuse if this jae wanna cause harm, he would not ahve saved Yunha the day Yunho nearly drowned from saving Junsu??? Sorry I know I have a lot of questions...

[79_percent]

Aww that's alright! ^^ I love it! It means that you're really getting into the story, and there's nothing else I can ask for!

I know it's evil for me to end at such a cliff-hanger, but I promise the next part (and the one after) will explain everything. Everything that you said makes sense though, the plot can sway either way, but I'm not going to spoil it for you. ^^;