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[6loving6death6]

Seven Deadly Sins

Snow was pilling on the ground outside of the window that Bam was currently looking out of. How could he possibly be concentrating when winter break was seven weaks away, there was snow that looked like it was going to be five feat deep, and the teacher was talking in a monotone voice? Then again, he never really did pay attention

Comments

[lilafilly2]

I like it babe... I wonder which sin Ville is?

There are a few spelling mistakes, which if corrected, would make it easier to read. Otherwise, lovely.

[xxxmistyxxx]

i think Ville is certainly and undeniably L-U-S-T... XD hehe

and i second your statement, this is lovely and it definitely needs to be continued! :D

[gemofthestars]

love it babe! can not wait for more!

[meduusje]

mmm didn't i read this earlier?
or somewhere else?

[evilfairietoes]

i had the same feeling as Meduusje,
it was very familiar, don't know where i read it though.

[6loving6death6]

I use to be on AFF but then got sick of no one replying after a while. You probably read it there.

[unloved_metal]

This is good, will there be more soon?
*bribes you with strawberry and choc merengues!*