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bustedflush February 3 2013, 11:43:36 UTC
This is COMPLETELY DELIGHTFUL.

I love IRC as the grinny, practical, responsible adult (mostly), and you know anything that involves OMR in almost any way pleases me greatly -- the combination of the two is almost look much to take in. And I mean that in an entirely non-pornographic way, thanks very much.

Also, Strama's confusion is very, very much how I imagine him most of the time, even when there aren't penis and lady's underthings involved.

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cheryl_bites February 3 2013, 12:59:30 UTC
*Rubs hands with glee* My plan has worked!

Well, he's supposed to be more of a pervert than a responsible adult. Like, he watches, takes notes, and then moves in on Stram at his leisure when he's sure he'll be able to remember it all afterwards. (I don't know why I see IRC like this.) Lololol yes, I think double penetration is best avoided at this stage.

Bahaha! He is terribly hungover, in his defence?... Yes, you've probably still got a point. Heh heh heh.

(PS ancient_bat and I would like to know whether you, too, feel IRC's face looks like a borlotti bean, because she agrees that the resemblance is exact.)

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bustedflush February 3 2013, 13:46:08 UTC
lol Ok, well yes he's got his personal, carnal designs, but he's all "Oh dear, he must be bound up in his underthings, must help.", and "Hangovers must be treated with warm drink." It's nice that he wants Strama to feel better before he has his way with him. (Clearly I have an inability to not find him sweet IN SOME WAY, no matter the situation.)

(... I'm afraid to google borlotti beans out of concern for my life if I find myself attracted to them.)

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cheryl_bites February 3 2013, 14:03:25 UTC
Lol yes. Well, he's got a lifetime's worth of experience looking after the babies! Stram is just a large, shiny-shoed baby. (Well, I agree. I had no problem writing all those different descriptions of his smile.)

(Ahaha! AHAHAHAHA!!! First Inler the salad and now Ivan the bean. Every time I write IRC pron for you I give you a fixation with some kind of plant food! I wonder if I can turn this into a tool for worldwide vegan slashy domination?)

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stickmarionette February 4 2013, 08:51:06 UTC
You have the most delightful turns of phrase, as always. And I love how sweet the story feels, even with all the sly humour.

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cheryl_bites February 4 2013, 17:38:54 UTC
Why, thank you! (It had to be sweet, really; IRC and Stram are very cute benchmates. Costacurta and Panucci are just being dirty.)

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paperscratchr February 4 2013, 17:16:06 UTC
Aaaaahh! You wrote it! omg I should feel all sordid and dirty and ew (I mean, PANUCCI! Billy WOULD NEVER!), but, um. I don't. So, there's that.

(I love how we're basically like poor Stram--all confused and clueless, until the little hints are dropped, one by one, and the jigsaw slots into place and omg my brain started running away with me. It would be OK if I just blocked out the Panucci and IRC and just focussed on the Billy/Stram, y/y?)

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cheryl_bites February 4 2013, 17:46:43 UTC
¦D *Cackles and rubs hands* Good of Costacurta and Panooch to flirt on that TV programme and give me the idea, was it not? (I did think you might overcome your initial reservations.)

(Hurrah, that makes me sound like a proper writer! And absolutely, go ahead. You'll notice Martha's ignoring Billy's existence entirely.)

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