Comments | 5thofficial: hurt

5thofficial

hurt

Aug 11, 2007 18:07

by curvasud

( Alessandro does not think. He is *furious*. )

player: alessandro nesta, club: ac milan, player: kaka, author: curvasud

Comments 6

zeldas August 12 2007, 20:52:01 UTC

I am a bit overcome at the moment. But: this begs to be turned into a 4 (or even 5 parts) fic. You know you want to, or maybe know that I'm going to beg forever for it.

curvasud August 12 2007, 23:21:52 UTC

=/ It was very...last-minute.

magic_beans August 19 2007, 14:47:26 UTC

I'm a bit late to this, but I really have to say how much I liked it. The mercenary Sandro alongside the Sandro that knows very well what Ricky's feeling, that killer sentence with Ricky against the doorknob, and the fact that Ricky complies. It works very well.

curvasud August 19 2007, 21:35:13 UTC

Thank you very much. =)

withhook October 2 2007, 09:02:18 UTC

There is no other word for me to use but 'adoration'....or maybe 'the most delightful sadism i've read' ?

aviz March 21 2008, 01:49:16 UTC

I like this. This is the best, ost realistic portrayal of Ricky so far and for the first time...I don't want to throttle him. But I can relate more to Sandro...it6's supposed to be that way, isn't it? When in a relationship, you perhaps don't really know the other party well at all...and yet you still care and feel the pain when they leave.