chakra#3 - gold - the solar plexus - chakra of will and desire

[505247]

Your belly pillows my head, my ear pressed to your navel as to a shell. We're on the carpet, wet limbs splayed and cooling, mouths open, still as corpses. The afternoon trickles by

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[horsepucky]

Ahhh friday mornings

[505247]

:)

"Just a few more minutes....."

[revsweeney]

That last line is almost haiku

(I don't mean syllables so much as its oblique, deft image//meaning)

[505247]

Thank you.

That was a funny thing - I was going along with this vignette, planning to write a bit more, and as that last line came out, it suddenly felt complete.

[angelsdevils]

Sweet and precious.

[505247]

Thanks - you do mean precious in a good way, yes?

[angelsdevils]

Is there any other way?

[505247]

1.Of high cost or worth; valuable.
2.Highly esteemed; cherished.
3.Dear; beloved.
4.Affectedly dainty or overrefined: precious mannerisms.

When it comes to writing, I tend to think of "precious" as definition #4, so that's why I wondered for a sec. :)

[selflesslust]

moments built of yum. nice.

[505247]

"Moments built of yum." I like that.

[meridianblue]

I've got nothing profound to say, other than I'm enjoying your vignettes. The role reversal in that last line is a lovely touch!

[505247]

Thanks - it's really nice to know they are fun for people other than me!

I always find it pleasing when he struggles under my puny hold like Gulliver, and then suddenly, in a flash, I'm eyeing the ceiling…..