(for canadaphile) It's A Start

Jan 11, 2015 22:35

For: canadaphile

Title: It's A Start
Genre: idek comedy?
Rating: G
Length: 3,000 words
Summary: Budding friendships never start out easy.
Notes: Perhaps putting 'attempted crack' under things I could write wasn't that good an idea ^^'' All the same, you said to be wild and free like a stallion but I hope the stallion still finds it's way back to you :)

Jongin would like to think he's cool and suave, but nah. )

day: 1, rating: g, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, genre: comedy, length: oneshot

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pororoporn January 12 2015, 05:44:28 UTC
ack first 3doks fic i choose is this and i get so much cuteness akccjhsdjsjshjfhjsfjsfjj this might sound so greedy on my part but i honestly wanted a longer peek to their roommate life sjhakdhjfhsbjbjsfj

ALSO THIS PART IS GLORIOUS

> still looks like a pyshopath
> but maybe a cute one
> (oh shit you're still awake)
> (was that pillow throw supposed to be intimidating)
> (i'm not returning your pillow)
> (i won't be daunted by whatever karate moves you have)
> (try me)
> (why are your arms around my neck-)
>
>
> (ALRIGHT TAKE IT BACK)

BLESS U DEAR WRITER THIS WAS V CUTE !!!!!!!!!!

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canadaphile January 12 2015, 06:53:10 UTC
I shouldn't comment on my phone. It makes for atrocious spelling.
I was only in a dorm for a year, but I had a different room mate each semester. With both girls, we were only quiet and awkward when our families were around, otherwise it was like we didn't need introductions. We were sisters. This whole awkward college experience thing is totally foreign to me.

I enjoyed it, though. Jongin's excited and looking for what makes Kyungsoo unique. Kyungsoo's polite and quiet but ready to defend his room mate's honour. (Him cracking his knuckles and threatening Chanyeol was such a cute image. Leave it to Chanyeol to bring out the best in people.)

The phone conversations took me a bit to understand what they were, but that last one is gold.

First night in the dorm, and Jongin nearly dies at his room mate's hands ... . That is a sign of friendship. Any relationship begun with food is one to cherish.

Thank you for the lovely story. ♥ I really enjoyed it; it's as feel-good story. UwU

=^..^=~

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canadaphile January 21 2015, 18:40:39 UTC
Dorms are different, anyway, so no worries. You did really well. UwU

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kkamjongg_ah January 12 2015, 14:27:19 UTC
Yhbjjfvvb NJ jgfrdxc this was so adorable! Especially the bits with jongin on the phone huehuehehe :3

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bookishvice January 13 2015, 01:24:59 UTC
I CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANT WITH THIS FIC!! IT'S TOO ADORABLE WHYYYY
AND YOU…you wrote writer Jongin. ILY 4eVER <3

After a lot of huffing and puffing and dragging his goodness-knows-what-sis-threw-in-there luggage up the three storeys
I love this opening!

You can't blame a writer for wanting to lead a somewhat more abnormal life
SCREAMS He’s a writer!?!?!!!

and a bit above average looking man with eyes a little too big for his tiny profile. Hmm, he could work with that.
LOL

> no i'm not being bullied
> yet
OTL poor bb~

> my roommate is not a psychopath
> i guess he looks a bit like one but i'm still intact
CACKLES

> he's a hyung
> what do you mean someone can look after me
> for goodness' sake i am already in university
> yes yes i will always be your little nini
LITTLE NINIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

"ARE YOU HAVING FUN WITH YOUR ROOMMATE WITHOUT YOUR BEST FRIEND!?"
LMFAO ANNOYING BBF YEOL

"Come on Jongin it would be fun ( ... )

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bookishvice January 21 2015, 13:45:16 UTC
writer jongin is beautiful ❤

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eimerb January 14 2015, 10:11:38 UTC
Super funny and cute at the same time!!

How do u came up with this style of telling the story!?! I really adore it.

Thank you so much i have a good time reading this fic ^^

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