hallenge #74

[gothbunnies]

Title: The Grey Lady
Rating:PG
Pairing: godric gryfindor/rowena ravenclaw/salazar slytherin
authors notes: I guess its prety decent. I have never written anything like this it was one of those.. odd ocuranced of inspiration I guess. well enjoy
time: 34 minutes

Comments

[snapes_angel]

I recommend inserting an extra space between paragraphs. I also second the spell-check suggestion too: but you do have quite a bit of potential in this piece.

[gothbunnies]

hmm thank guys. I know i was going to fix them but i had to leave soo yeah..
its not the best thing ive ever written but I guess its ok