2. our only disguise

Nov 02, 2009 17:04



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2. our only disguise
Katie.
2016 words

our only disguise )

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supergoodtimes November 2 2009, 18:49:43 UTC
Katie laughs and laughs. Maybe this year of college won't be such a nightmare after all, she thinks--and then she sees Effy, across the cafeteria, looking at her, and her laughter dies in her throat.

Gosh, that's perfect! Its like she doesn't even know how fragile she is, even though she tries to have the upper hand.

Love NaNo.... it brings gems out like this! Thanks for sharing.

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botherd November 2 2009, 20:45:35 UTC
Oh, thank *you* for reading! I really appreciate it. ♥

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puffy_wuffy November 2 2009, 20:36:01 UTC
Yum! I read the first one you posted, and should have commented there, but I went right through to this one instead. They're both brilliant, and best of luck getting to 50k!

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botherd November 2 2009, 20:47:05 UTC
Thanks so much! ♥

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muiriosa November 2 2009, 20:40:47 UTC
I didn't get around to commenting yesterday but yaaaaay for this! Aww, poor Katie, I really do feel for her :(

Loved JJ in this, esp:

"Only one case of chlamydia," JJ helpfully supplies, "but that was a year ago. I'm sure it's cleared up now."

Hehehehe!

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botherd November 2 2009, 20:56:05 UTC
Really glad you're liking it so far! ♥

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botherd November 3 2009, 19:01:01 UTC
Thanks! :D

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musicffyou November 2 2009, 21:25:22 UTC
awesome awesome job. cant wait to read more.

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botherd November 3 2009, 19:01:17 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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