Keep Me Close- Chapter XXIX

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.
Editor: sherlockelly. She and I are so ready for the season to start.
A/N: Prepare youself, it's a long one, kids!

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[canucksrule1944]

Uh.. I.. um. Wow. That was so hot and amazing and spectacular. I... can't think right now lol.

Evgeni o.O woah. So hot.

[revuko]

Haha, glad I broke the barrier for bj writing now so I can write more of them later! :D Gotta say, it was pretty fun :P And the fact that it was hot makes writing this monster worth it.

Thanks!

[revuko]

Sorry for the inconvenience, I blame lj/my computer/anything but myself X(

Come on, I highly doubt that!

But yay! That's such and amzing thing to hear, seriously, totally makes my day :) And glad you like Devin too, he'll have a bigger part in the story now, seeing as how attached I've become to him lately, haha.

[revuko]

ohhhh questions? Don't be shy, ask away! questions you have could help me not forget to answer them later on!

[capshockeygrl]

OMG.

This story.

And... just... <3

I love you. And I'm totally incoherent. And please post soon. I adore this story.

[revuko]

:D Glad I could write this for your reading pleasure lol, love you too! And pretty incoherant as well, guh, I'm too tired to write reviews.

Post soon? I'll try! Thanks as always <3

[hkylvr]

I love jealous!Joe so much! He and horny!dancer Evgeni are just too hot for words! Bravo. I believe that taxi ride was one of the hottest sex scenes I've ever read. Write more!

Devin, too, continues to be amazing. He doesn't sound like a very sincere blackmailer, lol, but I understand how scared Joe and Evgeni are. I just love Devin's shenanigans haha.

“I just like to keep my options open.”

So will we be learning more about what Devin considers his options to be? I'm assuming he's bisexual.

I really cannot wait for more! :D

[revuko]

jealous!Joe is like a child in my mind, screaming 'mine' at other people and pouting. While horny!Evgeni was probably the best thing to write ever. Don't really do it too often, so when it comes out, it should be big! Hey, blowing someone in a moving cab? heeyyyy no problem. Write more?? I don't want to make car!sex overkill (thanks for the 'hottest sex scenes ever' btw haha) ! I guess I just have to come up different situations. Oh well. They have that book to look through at least ;)

~*~*~OMG I should make drabbles after this, name it the title of the book, and have 58 chapters of how they do each different position~*~*~ Kelly, read this and tell me what you think

Lol sorry, just got a plot bunny. 58 of them apparently, and the editer of this really needs to know.

Devin? I love that kid. I don't know how one can be a reluctant blackmailer... I know he isn't doing a very good job of it. I'm not complaining, if he wasn't a blackmailer then I wouldn't have gotten to write this.

And thanks for the wonderful input like always :)

[sherlockelly]

I THINK YES

[revuko]

Oh jesus, what am I doing to myself? First the story, which will probably have 60 something chapters at the rate it's going, and now I just throw out there 'hey! Why don't I write another 60 chapter story??'

...yeaaaaah

[ezotericka]

Oh holy jesus I think I died. You...guh...you're definitely one of my favorite authors ever, not gonna lie. I feel like I was in the club with them, and your descriptions really made it all so vivid and brilliant to imagine. Made me think of my first time at a club and there are some good memories there.

And super confident Nabby? Goodness, woman, I thought I was going to explode. I just wanted to hug him for that (ok, so maybe "hug" isn't exactly it...). Also, I loved the description of Evgeni's shirt as a "dappled bluish grey coat." I don't know why.

Also, hee at Devin picking up a guy who "looked suspiciously like Torrey" (and at Devin being a manwhore who likes to "keep his options open"). <3

Sorry for rambling. In short I love this. I can't think of anything worth gifting you for it... would you be interested in my soul? *fails at leaving useful feedback*

[revuko]

first- lmao at appropiate icon

second- Really?? I'M not gonna lie, it's awesome to hear that ;) That's exactly what I was going for, considering everyone should experience gay hockey romping in clubs at least once in their lives, and since most of us aren't lucky enough to see it first hand, I thought I'd try and make it as realistic as possible.

Lol, I want to "hug" hockey players a lot too. It's a daily problem for me. I'll make nabs more confident in the future, how does that sound? And thanks :) Idk why I compared him to a horse... I noticed I didn't have enough metaphors, and that was the only one I could come up with hahaha.

No, rambling is great! As you can see, I tend to ramble right back. Gah! It's a bad habit, lol. I don't take souls, sorry, but reading awesome reviews like this always brightens up my day :3 and this feedback is perfect, I loved reading it ;)