Keep Me Close- Chapter XXIX

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.
Editor: sherlockelly. She and I are so ready for the season to start.
A/N: Prepare youself, it's a long one, kids!

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[konishi_zen]

*whimpers* dammit! You had to leave it like that! This was fucken hot and it totally brought the adage "It's the quiet ones you gotta watch out for" to mind with Nabby's performance. I was just grinning like an idiot and wishing I had the pleasure to watch or be a participant, cause that was fucken hot

[revuko]

I know, I'm sorry! It was already 20 pages long though unfortunately, and from past experience, I know 24 pages doesn't fit into one post... So I had to cut it short (ignore the fact that this wasn't short at all though lol). But don't worry, the next chapter will pick up right after this :)

And seriously, in interviews with Nabby, all I watch it his tongue. You know he's good at with with something other than wetting his lips with it, jesus. It's just... so... bendy like the rest of him.

and yay for achieving exactly what I wanted to achieve >:D Thank you like always!!

[konishi_zen]

Gah, I hear you. The limits on eljay are frikkin' weird. I was just like "wait...no...wait...need more...*sighs*" and ended up going on a slash bender, cause I needed to get that out of my system, kind of thing. :P!

*grins* I hear you on the tongue! I find myself looking at his mouth and thinking the dirties possible things when I see him talk. Heh.

Oh, you sure did! I'm on tenterhooks for the next part, that's for sure!

[offthepost]

oh HOT DAMN. ....um. hi. i really hope youre like continuing this very soon...like... posting the next part like....NOW. kthx.

jesus woman. i love this side of evgeni. and AW OMG THAT LAST LINE.

this was just really hot. omg. haha

[revuko]

I haven't even written it yet :( boo

But I <3 confident Yevi as well; the little guy has to come out of his shell sometime, so why not at a club, right? And one line of fluff to even out the hot and heavy, hahaha

And thank you!

[oohlala]

oh, this story. how you torture me.

okay, as soon as seto was dressing them, i knew they were going to a club. loved it! especially the dance scene, akon's 'sexy bitch' was def playing in my head lol. and the part where nabs was obviously bored at the table and trying to to deal with the pda couple, i could totally believe it.

i promised you images.

[revuko]

HAHAHAHA!!! I can't even look at straight on; only in the edge of my vision can I handle this.

And I know ;) This story doesn't have many cliffhangers, so I thought I'd throw you a bone here (ignoring the fact that I got why too into this and wrote too much for my own good). Aren't you appreciative??? I bet you are.

Devin and I aren't very subtle, are we? Haha though there isn't many places where a man would wear shredded jeans when believed to be a straight man. Besides the castro, heyyyy. I hope the non-californians got that.

And I want to see nabby all over Joe (or any shark for that matter) for reals while Akon is playing :( The fact that I probs won't makes me sad.

[oohlala]

although devin often dresses like he's going to a gay club 80% of the time, anyways. i am very appreciative, you know that! someone told me that my bb, jamie and devin are bffs. i think he should make an appearance. sweaty curls in the gay club, dancing to gaga. JUST A THOUGHT. THIS IS WHY I DON'T WRITE LOL.

i'll probably icon that picture later. but bedddd.

[revuko]

Touche. I like it too.

Excuse me, but it is torrey and devin who are bffs, and noe jamie stinkin' mcginn is going to take my hubbie's spot. LOL, maybe you shouldn't (except you totally need to so we can have more than 2 writers of shark porn here).

OMG and then use it for reviews to this. yesssss I love it.

[isuckatlifen]

holy fucking shit... my mouth is dry from reading this... incoherent adasklfjaionadnkvaskldng

i think i need a shower...

I fucking love you and this story.

[isuckatlifen]

okay a bit more coherent now. so i thought i would take the time to tell you just how amazing this chapter was as a whole. you get devin's character perfectly, and him going to a gay bar but being almost completely certain he isn't gay. and evgeni being the one to initiate and actually being really freaking amazing at everything he's doing and have so much confidence. it's a really nice thing to see that Joe is rubbing off on him. And him just doing it because he wanted to please Joe to thank him for everything was really endearing to kind of bring it back from a really steamy scene to the basic dynamics of how their relationship is. I don't know if this made any sense but basically you are an incredible author.

[revuko]

Awwww I love these kind of reviews <3

I love Devin so much, he is going to be in this so much more from now on; it;s even better that you like his character, and that it's believable! When someone is in-character, it just makes writing the extra details worth it.
And Evgeni's got to step up sometime, right? It's a slow process, (29 chapters of it, haha) but half-way through the season seems like a good time for one to be coming out of their shell, right? And Joe is most certainly helping with that (but not with consequenses :O ).

I don't think this reply will make any sence at all, because they never seem to when it's posted :( But thank you so much! The next chapter is up if you want to check it out

[gothickaoru]

*Flail!* Your Devin is so loveable, it makes me want to punch him, then hug him as he tries to strangle me afterward. I love the possesive!Joe (haha, Devin called him Joey) and I like how Evgeni was sorta acting like a slut (dont hurt me!!) :D. It made my day! (That and I love blow job sences!)Bwehehehe! I loved it! :D (yeah, again)

[revuko]

lol thank you!
And Yevi? a slut? maybe just for joe ;)

The next chapter it up, if you want to go check it out! (and how's that plot bunny coming? ;) )

[gothickaoru]

I read it. I dont think I've yet to comment on it cause I'm so damn lazy.

And the plot bunny is coming. All over the Sharks locker room floor. :D

[revuko]

daaaaamn I'm liking this plot bunny.
Hopefully soon? I'm so anxious!