Stay (Joe Thornton / Evgeni Nabokov)

[sherlockelly]

Title: Stay
Pairing: Joe Thornton / Evgeni Nabokov
Team: San Jose Sharks
Rating: Implied R?
Disclaimer: Real people, fake story.
Summary: Patty is not on the roadtrip and Joe hasn't been without a roommate in three years.
Author's Note: This is a little experiment with all dialogue. I had to give Nabby an exaggerated accent to be able to

Comments

[revuko]

YOU LIE TO ME! I was still washing my face yo

[sherlockelly]

I DIDN'T THINK IT WOULD TAKE YOU THAT LONG! I still had to do my italics when I texted you. :\

[revuko]

meh. I was cleaning my woven bracelet things on a spur of the moment type of thing, so I guess I'll let this one slide. plus I still had first comment.
WHAT IS WITH ALL THE NEW STORIES ON 2M4S THOUGH???

[sherlockelly]

Dude, I know! EXPLOSION!

[revuko]

So I love how the reader gets to imagine whatever the hell they want, and no matter how many times I read this, I still get a girl boner because something new happens every time. And you know how amazing that is for me!

What's even better (well, still awesome compares to you know, the "sex") is your humor in it! It's realistic and witty, and I just love hard to get!Evgeni and cuddly monster!Joe. *squishes them*

This is a great one, and I'm glad I could let your writing know no bounds because I enjoy reading it

<3

[sherlockelly]

NABBY DOESN'T LIKE MOVIES ABOUT WAR! >:( He will NOT watch anything about war! Hahaha. Stubborn little dude.

Thank you love!

[revuko]

American made war stories do not usually favor the Russians! Oh, and I absolutely loved this by the way:

“A bed is a bed.”

“Bhut this is your bed.”

“It’s ours if you stay.”

I have no idea why. It's just so sweet, and so subtle, but really gripping at the same time, you know? Guh... Just wonderful!

[rin_x_x]

XD "girl boner". Thats freaking awesome.

[b_mofan07]

awsome...i love the conversation between nabby and thornton

[more_unknown]

Oh man. You have Joe down so perfectly. He's such an adorable bastard and to get that through dialogue is so awesome. Nabby too. Ugh. 100% precious. Love. <3

[jisforjane]

This was so sweet and adorable. You know it's fantastic if more_unknown and I comment on something that isn't NC-17.

Well done. <3