Keep Me Close- chapter XVIII

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: R

Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.

Editor: Sherlockelly

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Comments

[fairygirl03]

Oh Devin, how I love you *marries*

SO. *melts* I having such a hard time describing how I loved this chapter. I think my thoughts are all over the damn place because of you, Joe, Evgeni and Devin. So not fair!

Okay. Joe can be an ass but I like it, lol. And Evgeni, poor bb! but uh, can I say I love him *even* more for yelling at Joe? Because I have no idea why but that was just a WIN in my book, haha.

At this point, it's taken me 20 minutes to write this and reading it twice. And I still can't stop smiling or give you anything better than I LOVE THIS!!! and you. and joe. and evgeni. and I have so much love for you all right now, it hurts, lol.

oh and p.s. tell Seto no Dallas hookers ;]

[revuko]

Lol don't worry, he won't be getting any for quite a while ;) Devin that is. I'm not sure if I can say the same about the other two :x

GUH I am so freaking glad that you liked it! Truth be told, I wanted it up to your standards because that was the first critical critic I've gotten! But don't worry about it, if you ever have anyother, feel free to tell me! I'd hate it if the story lost the same... 'charm' (if you could call it that) that is had from the beginning.

So yes, angry!Evgeni finally appears. And I love Joe with all my freaking heart, he deserved it. Don't go mouthing off, sir! Especially after the sex! Which is just bad timing all around XD

But yes! Thank you so much for the review once again! Ahh you make me so happy everytime <3

[fairygirl03]

Orly now? Devin not getting any? Huh. That sounds odd, lol. But other two? ;]

Omg, really? That's like... a "wow" moment because I don't think anyone has every done that and I feel flattered. *blushes* But I, honest to the hockey gods, don't have a negative damn thing to say. And now that I know you want to know the bad stuff, I'll tell you if it comes up again, lol.

Bad timing AND he was mouthing off about something he didn't fully know about! Stupid!Joe has to come out now and again =/

It's just a trade off ;)

[revuko]

Joe can be sweet and romantic... but apparently only when Devin is around. Oh Joey, will you ever learn?
You say the cheesy stuff with the guy you like! That's how you reel them in, with your charm!

Ohhh well. I guess he'll just have to figure that out on his own, haha.

But when that time comes I'm sure well all be happy. So it is the build up that we must live through along with them! Woo!

[revuko]

Oh no, missing chapters is never good D: But it's good that the last one was super freaking long, so I guess it was just a super update for you! woo!

*sigh* Yes... Joey needs to learn to keep control of himself. Evgeni should just keep a leash on him at all times -_-

But other than their drama, thanks so much for the review! I hope to see you next chapter :) I hope you don't miss it next time lol

[revuko]

First of all, wow.

The whole thing? In one sitting? That's gotta be like... at least an hour and a half. I give my kudos to you! And then I just realized how flattering that is for me just now XD I can't believe someone would do that for this story.

I'm glad you liked it ;) And Devin, and not so much Joe. But we live and we learn, and he's got to make it up sometime, right?

Thanks for the review, and for reading it all haha, hope to see you next chapter!

[phantom_19]

LOVED IT. these two really need to get their act together and and figure out that they love each other and get it over with. Evegni it wasn't your fault what happened to you, let Joe help you.

[revuko]

I know right?? *sigh* so many problems

Thanks for the review!

[revuko]

Haha well icant really blame you for slacking, considering all the work I know you have :O

But I know the quality ofthe review wil make up for the delay ;)