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(FIC) Why Doesn't It Make Sense?

Mar 16, 2009 11:28

Alex’s hands are shaking hard as he listens to Nicklas’s words. He’s stunned at what he’s hearing and he doesn’t know whether to scream or to punch something. He’s so tempted to do both, but knows that it’s all pointless. It’s all over and done and he now has all the pieces of the horrible puzzle that was Pittsburgh.

Alex knew when he found ( Read more... )

rating: r, bill guerin, nicklas backstrom, evgeni malkin, author: konishi_zen, alexander ovechkin, team: pittsburgh penguins, team: washington capitals

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konishi_zen March 18 2009, 12:21:41 UTC

As soon as I get my marks done, I'll work on the next part. Glad you liked this part also!

demens_rosa March 16 2009, 16:52:00 UTC

Is it sad that I'm more interested in exactly what Nicky yelled at Alex at the party than I am about the conversation between Nicky and Guerin?

I'm also interested in which touches frighten Nicky and why since he touches Alex in the end of this one and lets Alex pat his head in the last one but wouldn't let Alex grip his shoulder. One more piece to this already confusing puzzle.

Once again, I have to point out how well you conveyed the loyalty between these two. The fact that Alex won't touch Nicky for Nicky and how Nicky will break down and touch Alex for Alex conveys this idea so well.

Once again beautifully painful in all the right ways.

So, that "End" there, does that mean no more of this story or will the loving, begging, kind of desperate fans get a new POV in a bit? Maybe a Geno's perceptive or even a Bill Guerin view of what happened?

konishi_zen March 19 2009, 14:03:02 UTC

Is it sad that I'm more interested in exactly what Nicky yelled at Alex at the party than I am about the conversation between Nicky and Guerin?

No, actually. That conversation was very loaded, so it makes sense that it would carry more weight than the Guerin/Nicky one. It's not a far stretch to guess what that one implied.

I'm also interested in which touches frighten Nicky and why since he touches Alex in the end of this one and lets Alex pat his head in the last one but wouldn't let Alex grip his shoulder. One more piece to this already confusing puzzle.It's memories and basically how despite full disclosure, Nicky can't let anyone, not even Alex get too close. Even though it's in the past, he's not dealt with the issues the situation has brought up, so any indication of anyone wanting to bring him in close will trigger alarm bells, so to speak ( ... )