Beneath the... (Final Chapter)

[24iza_run]

Title: Beneath the…
Rating: R for words.
Characters: OT5 (All Arashi members as brothers)
Genre: AU, drama, family, angst
Disclaimer: Only the plot is mine~
Summary: 2 years ago Osayama Satoshi was involved in a terrible accident that made him lost partial of his memories. Even though he survived the impact, he becomes mentally incapable and has to

Comments

[nijimirai]

omg like a few people, I also almost thought Satoshi was in the coffin at first DDD: but then yeahhh phew it was just the old man! *wipes sweat

[24iza_run]

Hahaha. I didn't mention who's funeral on purpose to keep the suspense. It worked then 😆

Yeah, at least their father have good sons. Yep, it must be shocking for their mom when she found out Jun already married. That's a big sign enough that she wasn't welcomed anymore.

Some characters have minor roles, but they still play important roles to the brothers! (Like the old couple, Takayama, even the homeless man in the earlier chapter ^^). Their decision also determined which direction this story will head. Some weren't so right, but they still managed to fix it in the end.

Hahaha. Masaki's antic is stil there XDD Actually, I love ended a story with any of them get married or a born of a baby because it gives a vibe of newborn hope 😊

You're such an amazing person for following this story and commenting it until the end. And yeah, we even end up become friends! Thank You SO mich for the wishes and Thank You SO much for reading until the end 🙌 Let's get along more after this!

[wjktl]

Thank you so much! I love the ending!! I was shocked at first when you wrote about funeral...i was praying hard....please not Satoshi...because you ended the previous chapter with satoshi accident. Nice trick, writer san 😎

I love the way jun answer his mother. She deserve it! These 5 brothers are so strong. Together they can achieve anything. And omg! My satoshi is getting better. Masaki is really kind to take care of satoshi wage for two years...he is so kind.

The last part...i am laughing hard. Thank God jun dont know about the naked masaki scene. He will kill him for sure.

Now , the youngest is already married. Hope the orher 4 wkll find their best match ne 😘😘😘😘

Thanks so much for this wonderful story. Let me tell you this, this is my most fav siblings story . Usually i dont read siblings story ....but this story hit me hard! Love it😍

And yeah....selamat menunaikan umrah

[24iza_run]

Hahaha. I did that on purpose to keep the suspense 😎 Glad you like the ending.

Jun realy missed his mother at first, but now he finally can move on from the past ^^ Their effort to fix up everything altogether that make them finally reach this point 😊

Hehehe. I have a tendency to make the story ended with one of them got married. Awww Thank You SO much for liking my story! I'm very glad you enjoyed it 😆 It makes so happy to write story that make you hook with it. And Thank You VERY much for reading and commenting it untio the end. You're wonderful person <3

Thank You SO much for the wish!

[j_sei]

Yukichan, otsukaree :D

I'll read it all when I am on break later this week :D

[24iza_run]

Thank youu T^T

Take your time!

[mae74]

This was such a perfect ending 😊

[24iza_run]

Awww Thank You SO much for following until now TT_TT You often drop your comment.

[24iza_run]

I checked your LJ and saw it. Uuuuh I don't know what to say. It's such honour T_T I'm very glad you enjoy it. And Thank You SO much for crediting me 😄 I suggest that you add more plot and characteristics of to make the story more unique and yours. Because there are too many similarities in my opinion. This is your first time writing? :)

Oh, nooo. I don't recommend you to update like that except if you have a lot of time. I had to complete it before I departed, so that's why it turned out like that. Just updated it within the speed you're comfortable with 😊