Beneath the... (Chapter 15)

Jul 01, 2017 00:38

Title: Beneath the…
Rating: R for words.
Characters: OT5 (All Arashi members as brothers)
Genre: AU, drama, family, angst
Disclaimer: Only the plot is mine~
Summary: 2 years ago Osayama Satoshi was involved in a terrible accident that made him lost partial of his memories. Even though he survived the impact, he becomes mentally incapable and has to ( Read more... )

series, rating:r, arashi

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wjktl June 30 2017, 17:25:39 UTC
There is always a chance to fix everything. They have to sit and talk ...solve the problem. but for that thing to happen, all of them need to meat each other. (( i want to kidnap those 5 and put them in a room for 3 days))

I feel sad for all 5 brothers

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24iza_run July 3 2017, 12:24:23 UTC
Yeah, one of their biggest mistakes is miscommunication. Everyone is too occupied by their past or trouble that it only worsen the misunderstanding even more.

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting! The next chapter is up!

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nijimirai June 30 2017, 18:22:53 UTC
Oh, no. Oh no, no, no T____T Nooooo....

Haha everything seems to be getting worse and worse with each chapter!! But I keep reading it because I have faith that there will be a happy ending eventually (I'm so naive ne? XD)

Ah, so Jun did make someone pregnant! (It's 2.15am now and I almost typed "Jun is pregnant", LOL)...Sigh but I think the girl is not the reasonable type, is she? :( Of course, I think every mother wants the father of her children to be responsible as well, but...poor Jun's whole family is disintegrating T_T it's not the right time to keep calling him, girl! anyway you still have a few more months before the baby comes out, LOL.

I got so scared at Sho's emotional breakdown... ;A; poor Sho! and Satoshi can't reach Masaki for help, oh no T_T

I'm still naively trusting that things can be resolved eventually, and looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you for sharing~!!<3

P.S. I hope everything is better in the morning! Whatever happened sounds so scary D: *hugs* I'm glad that you're safe though!

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24iza_run July 3 2017, 12:34:07 UTC
Who knows it will really end up with happy ending? It's not naive. It's being positive ^_^ And I think it's really great.

Hmm...it's still unknown is the woman is 'the right one' or not. She must be very scared that she keeps contacting Jun like that. Things are really bad for Jun now.... He has to get a grip of himself, but the problems with their family makes it difficult.

Thank you :) I hope nothing bad will happen to my home.

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting too! New chapter is up!

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yumn_yumi June 30 2017, 22:06:09 UTC

I hope you are okay now... anything that make a lpud sounds in middle night, I hope it'll dissapear. Hehe.. and don't worry, we are always understand writer problems 😅

At dome point I'm wondering if Sho will become crazy. I mean really a crazy man with that uncontrolable emotions. He must be feel helpless now.

There there Satoshi-kun. Maybe Masaki have a little discussion with LAB. /hug him/

I hope Nino will be okay as soon as possible.

And Jun... I hope he will not killed by Sho or his father if they know his problems.

And sankyuu for sharing this chapter. It's really mental breakdown *like Sho* for me...
See you on next chapter ^ - ^

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24iza_run July 3 2017, 12:38:31 UTC
Hehehe. I'm fine, thank you ^^ And thank you for understanding!

Sho is really showing symptoms of getting crazy now :( It's not helping with the family and company's situation is growing worsen now.

Everyone is facing their fear and troubles now. And Jun...he really needs to find the right way to solve his problem instead of running away.

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting too! Just updated the new chapter :D

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nihonarashi June 30 2017, 22:20:35 UTC

i missed some chapters in weeks so i start to read from chap1 to get the feel and omg this is getting so much complicated uh
i feel i wanna cry ;___; i hope they can sit together and talk together
actually i still curious about ohno's accident and kazu too xD hope you will tell the detail later :)
thanks and cant wait for next!

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24iza_run July 3 2017, 12:41:08 UTC
Hey! It's been a while :D It must be taking quite a time to reread it from chapter 1. Thank you for your time!

They really need to sit together and talk if they want to get over their problem. It's just getting worse and worse if they don't think for a way together.

There's detail about Ohno's accident on much later chapter. And of course the secret Kazu is keeping too :)

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting! New chapter is up!

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agustin1982 July 1 2017, 00:17:47 UTC
I hope everything okey with your house and I hope you're fine too, thats really scary... but like you said as long as it's not burglar, its safer... human can kill, so they're more dangerous.
I agree with you, human can do dangerous things because they're real.
about this chapter, yeah they're breaking down one by one but they can fix that, they're strong enough to do that. This is just the beginning and they have a second chance.
I hope Satoshi will be strong, he can do it. Come on Satoshi, Gambatte ne!! don't give up!
Kazu, Jun, Sho and Masaki!! All of you can do the right things, for your family and yourself.
This is not the ending, for me they have chance, just be strong with the obstacle around them.
Thank you for sharing the new updates :D

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24iza_run July 3 2017, 12:45:28 UTC
Yeah, it's really scary. Human is definitely more dangerous because they can harm other people unlike 'unseen' things since it only can make people scared... Thank you for your wish! I hope nothing bad will happen from now and on too ^^

It's definitely up to them to decide what they want to do to solve the matter. There are too many miscommunications and misunderstands that if they don't try to find the way to fix it, nothing probably can be done to make it right again. Yeah, they have to stay strong and get together to overcome all of it now!

Just updated the new chapter! Thank You SO much for reading and commenting!

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