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23a_j10

Saving You

Jul 03, 2011 06:36

Title: Saving You [Two of Two]
Author: Alice: 23a_j10
Pairing: Jack/Alex
Rating: R
Beta: therapyrequired
Warnings: Suicide
Summary: Written for the prompt "Angel"
Disclaimer: I don't own/know the characters in this story
A/N: Sorry it's late I wasn't home, excuses, excuses I know xD

( Part Two of Two )

rating: r, author: 23a_j10, chaptered: saving you, beta: therapyrequired, pairing: alex gaskarth/jack barakat

Comments 22

hatefuleyes July 3 2011, 18:04:22 UTC

no jack nononono! just wait a little longer jack!

23a_j10 July 3 2011, 18:29:14 UTC

I know :(
I almost didn't write it that way but, I did.
I almost feel bad for it but I think it's meant to be,
Or rather the way it's not meant to be me.

Thank you :)

live_by_lyrics July 3 2011, 22:49:16 UTC

wahhhhhhhhh :(
This was so tragic, and ironic, and ugh.
I enjoyed it though.
All the sacrifice and secrets.
I can't help but wonder what Alex would do next...

23a_j10 July 3 2011, 23:54:06 UTC

I know, I felt so bad writing it! I very, very, VERY almost gave them a happy ending but I got over myself and yeah xD I'm over emotional.
Yeah, I felt I left it a little too open ended. Hmmm..

therapyrequired July 3 2011, 23:28:05 UTC

Gah you know how I feel about this <3

Your writing is amazing. I feel so privileged I get the opportunity to read some of it first.

23a_j10 July 3 2011, 23:59:10 UTC

Awwh, thank you :)
I don't know about my writing being amazing but I'll rake the compliment anyway xD If you'll accept I'd love to have you beta my new "Drop a Heart" chaptered fic too ^.^ But you don't have to :) <3

therapyrequired July 4 2011, 09:57:44 UTC

Well it is amazing :) So take the compliment, you deserve it.

OMG Yes of course I'd love to <3

23a_j10 July 4 2011, 11:05:53 UTC

Thank you :)
YAY, I'll message you soon!

merrikat95 July 4 2011, 00:09:08 UTC

No! Oh my god, if only Jack had waited just that tiny bit longer!
What is Alex going to do now?? Oh my god I wasn't expecting that, not at all. :(
The ending was so sad, but this whole story could not have been more perfect.
You have no idea how much I want an angel!alex to be my boyfriend. The wings! It would be perfect.

You Are such an amazing writer<3

23a_j10 July 4 2011, 00:17:09 UTC

I know =/ This was actually really hard for me to write because I get so attatched to fictional characters and I really wanted them to be okay but, *takes a deep breath*
I don't know if maybe I should write some kinda epilogue or just leave it totally open ended because it's not meant to be clean cut finished but I don't know if if feels finished enough, if you get me?
Oh yeah, angel!Alex any day! Actually, ANY Alex Gaskarth any day ;)

Thank you, it means a lot :)

merrikat95 July 18 2011, 09:57:44 UTC

uh wow I'm so late in replying to this, buuuuuut...
I think that it seems pretty finished where it is. like, it's really sad but it seems like a good ending.
HOWEVERRRR, i think having an optional epilogue would be really awesome! I wold love to read it! And I love your writing so much sgdhfsalgfa. this story is beautiful.

23a_j10 July 18 2011, 21:47:49 UTC

Ahah, I appreciate your lateness I always am xD
Yeah, I get that but mhh. But an optional epilogue does sound interesting. Maybe I'll consider it because I really loved writing this one :)

And thank you :)

darkbluerain July 4 2011, 01:20:29 UTC

noooooooooooooooooooooooo.
so sad!
i'm about ready to cry.
so good, but so sad.

23a_j10 July 4 2011, 11:06:15 UTC

I know, it's sad :(
Thank you :)