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FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg)

[anonymous]

Ah - this started out from this prompt, but quickly got away from me. I'm sorry! I hope you enjoy anyway. And if anyone would like to write Erik's inevitable capitulation, that would be fantastic.

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It takes Raven two months from the time she joins Erik (abandons her brother) for her to slip back into his bed.

She has learned from her past mistakes. This time, she wears her true form proudly, lounging naked on top of his sheets rather than hidden beneath them. In this form, she looks older, if only because the markers of adolescence are harder to spot when no human has ever displayed them quite like she does.

Raven hears Erik’s footsteps approaching the doorway and pretends very hard that her heart maintains a steady beat and her breathing remains perfectly even.

Two months are a very long time when they are filled with nothing but running and fighting and hiding, and she has done things of which she never thought herself capable (I expect better of you, Charles whispers in her mind, and she aches with shame and defiance

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[anonymous]

I love this you made me even feel sorry for raven!

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[ext_651486]

Excellent! I worried about making her unsympathetic, when she is so awesome. Thank you for your comment!

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[thenurse]

fuuuuuuuuck. that was fantastic! from erik's heart wrenching reaction, and total revulsion when the illusion snapped, to raven's wonderful wickedness, i'm just a bit in love with this.

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[ext_651486]

Thank you! That is awesome to hear. =)

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[poemwithnorhyme]

Holy crap, this is dark and perfect and.. wow.

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[ext_651486]

Perfect is a pretty high compliment; thank you!

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[ext_651486]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!

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[anonymous]

Shit, that was amazing. Thank you for that! What a fantastic fill!

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[ext_651486]

Thank you!

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[anonymous]

MY HEART!!! This was just gorgeous.

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2)

[ext_651486]

Thank you; so glad you liked it!

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[tacky_tramp]

YESSSSSSSS

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[ext_651486]

Thank you! Your comment made me laugh; it was about my reaction when I realized there was already a kink meme for this movie. So glad you enjoyed the fill!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2)

[anonymous]

PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE WORKING ON A SEQUEL