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Prompt Post: ROUND ONE

May 31, 2011 12:45

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FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) anonymous June 6 2011, 04:31:10 UTC

Ah - this started out from this prompt, but quickly got away from me. I'm sorry! I hope you enjoy anyway. And if anyone would like to write Erik's inevitable capitulation, that would be fantastic.

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It takes Raven two months from the time she joins Erik (abandons her brother) for her to slip back into his bed.

She has learned from her past mistakes. This time, she wears her true form proudly, lounging naked on top of his sheets rather than hidden beneath them. In this form, she looks older, if only because the markers of adolescence are harder to spot when no human has ever displayed them quite like she does.

Raven hears Erik’s footsteps approaching the doorway and pretends very hard that her heart maintains a steady beat and her breathing remains perfectly even.

Two months are a very long time when they are filled with nothing but running and fighting and hiding, and she has done things of which she never thought herself capable (I expect better of you, Charles whispers in her mind, and she aches with shame and defiance ( ... )

FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 04:37:56 UTC

“Hello, Erik,” she says in Charles’s most flirtatious voice, brilliant and certain with just a hint of arrogance, and the shock on Erik’s face makes the last of her humiliation fade away ( ... )

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 04:54:29 UTC

Aw, Raven, that was so deliciously evil. I completely approve! ::cough:: Such a delicious story, too. Thank you for writing! <3

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:39:04 UTC

Thank you! I love Raven and thinking about how she transitions from the girl we see here to later movies. So glad you liked it!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 04:55:36 UTC

Oh man, that was just super! So want a sequel to this!!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:39:58 UTC

Thank you! Working on a sequel now, actually. Hopefully it will work out!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) snarry_splitpea June 6 2011, 05:00:41 UTC

This is fantastic! I love the way your write Raven, darling. Thank you!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:42:08 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this! I was so worried when I got off track from the prompt, and it is a huge relief that you enjoyed it anyway. Thank you for commenting!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 06:15:46 UTC

Ah! This is just fantastic!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:42:45 UTC

Thank you!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 07:25:05 UTC

Wow. Um. Yes please and thank you! /fans self

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:43:20 UTC

And to think I was worried about the lack of sex. Glad it made a good impression on you anyway!

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) anonymous June 6 2011, 08:08:16 UTC

Wow...this is just SO good. I luv your characterization and the turmoil inside Erik, as well as Raven. Very well done. Please consider filling in more promts! hehe

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:44:10 UTC

With this kind of response, I am certainly considering it. Thank you for your comment; I'm so pleased that you liked it.

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) zhadra_ahni June 6 2011, 08:42:03 UTC

Ohmygod, this is fucking amazing! Agh, seriously, I can't even - ALKJSDFSDF, the anguish and longing in Erik is so fucking perfect, it just wrings my heart so cruelly, it's so awful, it's so right! ♥_♥ Of course he's suppressing all that enormous bottled emotion, of course he wants Charles, Charles, Charles, and that's the only thing that can break his composure, of course he can read and react to every nuance of the man, true and false, of course he can't help it, even though he knows it's Raven ( ... )

Re: FILL: Two Months (Make Him Beg) (2/2) ext_651486 June 7 2011, 22:47:27 UTC

TBH, I thought I was going to write something lighter and more smutty, and then this happened instead. Still not sure what happened, really. But I am ecstatic that it worked for you this way as well!

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm so glad both Erik and Raven worked for you - I love them so much as characters, and they are so complicated and emotional with FEELINGS even when they don't want to, and I'm glad that came across.

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