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Jul 03, 2011 22:06

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Charles/Erik, candy shop AU anonymous July 5 2011, 04:05:15 UTC

Charles runs a candy/sweets shop. Erik is a single dad with kids that love sweets, and they drag Erik to the Charles' shop every week.

I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate anonymous July 8 2011, 04:05:53 UTC

Not long after they moved to the area, the twins brought home permission slips to go on a walking field trip of the 'Historic Downtown Area'. The teacher also sent a note requesting that Erik come along as a chaperon because she apparently had no appreciation for the fact that authors have schedules, too. He agreed because the twins were very excited about all of it ( ... )

^ (1/?) anonymous July 8 2011, 04:06:33 UTC

Forgot to number the chapter.

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate anonymous July 8 2011, 06:43:32 UTC

Not!OP
This is so wondrous for me, you have no idea. Pietro is absolutely one of my favorite X-Men characters of all time, and I love people who portray him in all his obnoxious childish glory (though, obviously he'd be childish here as he is a child, still...). Beyond that, this is just so cute so far. I adore that you included the Kosher candy. It's a very nice touch. I'm not gonna lie, though, a part of me is wondering why Charles didn't re-name the shop "Groovy Gumdrops". Silliness aside, this is absolutely adorable and I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Oh, the land of fluff...

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate tenshi_nanashi July 8 2011, 08:06:53 UTC

I love that Pietro is trying to keep the other kids from touching the glass...that is sooo very funny to me.
Gotta love Charles' last line.
Please write more soon.

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate robinsson July 8 2011, 17:31:58 UTC

hurray for the poor sod!!!!
so cute and can't wait for more!!!

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate papercutperfect July 9 2011, 14:09:22 UTC

"Where are the Oompa Loompas?"

I laughed aloud at that.

Loving it so far! Please please write more, and soon!

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate kyme July 10 2011, 08:26:21 UTC

THIS IS SO ADORABLE I AM DYING. THE POOR SOD THAT HAS TO CLEAN THE GLASS. XD

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate irishburnett July 13 2011, 22:19:27 UTC

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

MY EMOTIONS!

Charles is so cute entertaining little kids and guuhhhh him giving Erik chocolate.

Which is the underlying subtext that he wants to WOOO HOOO with him. Trolololol.

I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (2/?) anonymous July 14 2011, 22:22:47 UTC

It didn't take much convincing for the kids to get Erik to go back to the candy store after school a week later. He pretended that he was just taking them for a walk, but when they reached their destination the twins' faces lit up ( ... )

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (2/?) irishburnett July 14 2011, 23:48:43 UTC

I am now convinced that you should never stop writing this ever. This needs to go until the end of time. :D

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (2/?) chiaki_ayumi July 15 2011, 03:22:41 UTC

Those last lines are <3

I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (3/?) anonymous July 17 2011, 00:21:27 UTC

Erik didn't really plan on going back to Goody Gumdrops only three days later, but the kids were excited about the festival and Erik couldn't really think of anything to write about, anyway. He hoped that maybe seeing the locals out and about would offer some form of inspiration ( ... )

I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (4a/?) anonymous July 17 2011, 19:19:47 UTC

Erik really wasn't expecting to run into Charles anywhere but in the candy shop, so when he went into the only bar in town and saw Charles happily conversing with the bartender, he was slightly taken aback. Charles saw him and patted the barstool next to him with a smile ( ... )

I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (4b/?) anonymous July 17 2011, 19:20:47 UTC

"The city of Between itself isn't a small town, really," Charles acknowledged, "But Historic Downtown qualifies in most everyone's mind. We're set apart from the rest of the city. We have our own tourism and the Historical Society is practically our government rather than the council. You must admit, it's rather like stepping back in time to come here. But then you just hop in your car and drive to the 21st century, which I believe is five-point-seven miles that way." Charles gestured vaguely ( ... )

Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (4b/?) chiaki_ayumi July 18 2011, 05:21:57 UTC

aww! Charles is so adorable! I can't wait for him to find out that Erik is his favorite author! <3

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