I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (5a/?)
anonymous
August 1 2011, 18:06:24 UTC
Over the next few days Erik found himself wondering what exactly had been bothering Charles so much at the bar, and why Raven was concerned that he might be drinking alone. It was plaguing his mind so much that he rewrote the beginning of the book he'd just started to include a similar scene. Erik wasn't sure whether he should feel more guilty for casting Charles as the main suspect or for killing off Raven.
The rewrites took over Erik's mind and his life for the next two weeks. He loved outlining and plotting and he could easily lose himself in it for months. The twins, however, had other ideas and decided that he really needed to take them to the park and leave his notes behind. It was a beautiful day, so he agreed.
It was nice to sit and watch his children play. They were little terrors, but they were Erik's little terrors and he loved them. Wanda was demonstrating her ability to swing "Way higher than YOU, Pietro!" when Erik heard a familiar voice shout
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Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (5b/?)drowningthenileAugust 3 2011, 13:25:50 UTC
so adorable!! i wonder how Charles would react if he finds out Erik's rewriting because of him. oh love love love. i want more. moar. moar. moar. moar... great story by the way! haha :D
Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (5b/?)
anonymous
August 24 2011, 01:18:21 UTC
This is SO EPIC!! Its a shame it looks like it been abandoned. Still I'll forever wait on this, check it everyday, since its that good, it should not be forgotten. *hugs fic*
Re: I'd Rather Fall in Chocolate (5b/?)
anonymous
September 1 2011, 10:02:28 UTC
This is utterly adorable and fascinating and I am totally stalking the hell out of it. I love Charles' enthusiasm (chocolate/sweets pickup lines ftw! X]) and sunniness contrasted with the darker/angstier past beneath the surface, and how Erik is totally being drawn in and fascinated (and guilt over casting Charles and Raven was way funny). Excellent all round! lol@ Logan being Scott's dog XD
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Anyways, I'm really loving the flow and energy of this fic so far! Can't wait to read more!
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Charles is absolutely adorable! Using the melting point of chocolate as a pick-up line? How cute is that?
And Pietro wanting to keep the glass clean! He's such a cute kid!
I love the thought of Erik as a murder mystery writer who lives in a haunted house!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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The rewrites took over Erik's mind and his life for the next two weeks. He loved outlining and plotting and he could easily lose himself in it for months. The twins, however, had other ideas and decided that he really needed to take them to the park and leave his notes behind. It was a beautiful day, so he agreed.
It was nice to sit and watch his children play. They were little terrors, but they were Erik's little terrors and he loved them. Wanda was demonstrating her ability to swing "Way higher than YOU, Pietro!" when Erik heard a familiar voice shout ( ... )
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I can't wait for the next part! :D
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Looking forward to the next.
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This is just too perfect for words.
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lol@ Logan being Scott's dog XD
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