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Prompt Post: ROUND FIVE

Jul 03, 2011 22:06

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Charles/Erik: AU, Slash, H/C anonymous July 3 2011, 22:00:12 UTC

Charles/Erik - Still Mutants AU

Inspired because this exists where James McAvoy plays a Rent-A-Boy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o97SLaneU80 (P.S. Rent-A-Boy McAvoy rhymes too well.)

--Charles gets kicked out of his home at some point while defending Raven. (Not necessarily right after finding her in the kitchen, could be years), years pass. At the
present" moment in time of prompt, to help support them, Charles is acting as a Rent-A-Boy. Erik's Schmidt hunting journey leads him to the same area that Charles and Raven live in, he happens across Rent-A-Boy!Charles, and through however writer-anon sees fit, they end up doing naughty things.

Charles can, of course, tell that Erik is a mutant as well and while he has built up walls for everyone else, he ends up slipping and projecting while they're having sex at some point during his meeting with him because Erik is special and there is just something about him and they were meant to be together. Cue cute " ( ... )

Re: Charles/Erik: AU, Slash, H/C anonymous July 3 2011, 22:08:58 UTC

Yes, this! So much this!

Re: Charles/Erik: AU, Slash, H/C anonymous July 3 2011, 22:32:20 UTC

He was so cute and unnerving at the same time as a rentboy, I'd love to see Erik's reaction to him like that ;)

FILL: The Human Abstract (1/?) kaseykcnew July 13 2011, 14:00:40 UTC

The Human Abstract (Damn you Edgar ( ... )

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (1b/?) kaseykcnew July 13 2011, 14:00:59 UTC

“Raven is my sister.” Charles said forcefully and Raven felt the raw emotion, the anger, the hurt and protective love rising in her brother. There was such power in her brother Raven knew, but she’d never known him to speak with only his emotions colouring his words against someone who insulted her - though she supposed that the only reason she heard it now was because Charles’ telepathy had never worked on his mother, for reasons neither of them truly understood ( ... )

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (1b/?) anonymous July 13 2011, 17:30:25 UTC

This is off to a wonderful start! I love the closeness between Charles and Raven. This fill looks like it's going to be excellent. Can't wait for more!

btw, though, you might want to put spaces between paragraphs in future posts since right now it's a bit wall-o-texty and hard to read. If you're writing in Word, just adjust the formatting so that it's single spaced and then add an extra space between paragraphs. It really makes a huge difference for reader enjoyment.

OP Here Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (1b/?) anonymous July 14 2011, 00:12:26 UTC

fjaklsdf Oh my god. I'm so glad someone's filling this. This has made my evening!! :DDDD *GLEE* I can't wait to see what happens next. <3<3<3

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2a/?) kaseykcnew July 14 2011, 14:28:38 UTC

(Learning from my mistakes with the previous part :p ( ... )

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2b/?) kaseykcnew July 14 2011, 14:28:58 UTC

Sighing in relief as Raven entered the restaurant to start her late-night shift, Charles closed the book in his lap and placed it on the small table-top next to him. He stretched his body as he stood, finding the burning of his back and thigh muscles to be comfortably bearable. It had felt worse earlier in the day and he found that he could ignore the burning as he made his way over to the cramped bathroom in the flat ( ... )

OP Here Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2b/?) anonymous July 15 2011, 04:30:10 UTC

And isn't that such a cheery realisation?

jflkasdhfd HNNGGHHH you're killing me (in good ways)

I should not be this pleased that Charles has bruises. I am obviously a horrible horrible person. I am LOVING THIS.

Stooping down to grab the bundle Charles carelessly threw it into the wash-basket, fully aware that it was Raven’s turn to do the washing but also fully aware that he’d do it himself when he got back.

This. This is so Charles, I don't even. <3

fsafjskdl Hnngghh oh my dahling you are making me so happy. I love how this is shaping up. It's just so...so....jflkasdhf;aslkdf *INCOHERENT SQUEEING*

Thank you so much for taking my prompt I can't wait for more <3<3<3

Re: OP Here Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2b/?) kaseykcnew July 15 2011, 14:22:38 UTC

Haha.

I shall continue to kill you then ;)

Charles with bruises is my personal kink.... as are cuff-links... and dark!Charles and BAMF!Charles and.... yeah, I have a lot of kinks xD

Charles is knocking on my head wanting to come in with this :p

Your prompt deserves more than my shoddy writing *nods* because Rent-a-boy McAvoy really does rhyme too well.... ^,^

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2b/?) anonymous July 15 2011, 04:41:26 UTC

I love how big brother Charles is for Raven. It really shows his shift in priorities and of course his transformation into Rent Boy!Charles was quite nice as well. (The bruises were a nice touch.) All in all, this is lovely. Can't wait for more!

Thank you so much for the formatting change, it really makes a huge difference!

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2b/?) kaseykcnew July 15 2011, 14:24:13 UTC

Charles is always going to look out for Raven; he's just that protective *nods*

I love a bruised Charles (seriously, most of my fics and fills contain some form of bruising... it's unhealthy) :p

xD

(I hate formatting things... it's always time-consuming -_-)

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2c/?) kaseykcnew July 15 2011, 14:20:01 UTC

It wasn’t as cold as Charles had thought it’d be, but the wind is still sharp enough to cause him to wrap his arms around his torso in an attempt to retain some warmth in his body. Sometimes he really did hate wearing this get-up - especially in the winter and he was amazed he hadn’t developed pneumonia in November. Sighing Charles cast out a telepathic net, searching for someone, anyone, to get caught in it just so he could go home.

Pausing for a long moment, his eyes losing their focus as he stared off into the distance, Charles smiled slightly, ‘There’s one.’ His eyes sparkled in relief and anticipation as he quickly set off at a brisk pace near to the bench he knew was on the crest of the hill in the park. As per usual, he’d gone for the park because it was familiar and he was never too far from home - but he was still far away enough to ensure none of Raven’s friends saw him ( ... )

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2d/?) kaseykcnew July 15 2011, 15:56:28 UTC

(I can't believe I'm writing this... *fans self* yikes ( ... )

Re: FILL: The Human Abstract (2e/?) kaseykcnew July 15 2011, 15:58:11 UTC

The older man leaned in close to his face and Charles stared at the darkened face with a strange feeling of calm washing over him; a feeling that wasn’t uncommon to him anymore as he’d experienced many times over the nights. Edgar pressed his body against Charles’ own and Charles could feel just how aroused the man was having Charles at his mercy - though it was really the other-way around there was no need to destroy the man’s illusion. ‘Fucking perfect... I’ll make him scream.’ Edgar’s mind whispered to Charles and he gasped as a wave of lust shot down his spine faster than a bolt of lightning. It wasn’t his lust but didn’t care because he needed the money and so this had to be convincing for the older man.

“Guess you want the full service then.” Charles dared to say, letting his words flutter nervously as Edgar stared at him with a dark gaze. ‘Though if you keep thinking you’ll take whatever I give without paying, that might change soon.’ Charles thought as he saw the cogs in Edgar’s head turning ( ... )

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