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Jan 16, 2006 02:05

Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: William Adama & Laura Roslin
Theme Set: Delta
Rating: PG

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( Water and flavor and love )

!set delta, battlestar galactica

Comments 38

twilight_mash January 16 2006, 10:39:33 UTC

NET-MOMMY!

Dude, so awesome! And funny and all that shiny good stuff.

kimbari January 16 2006, 10:46:39 UTC

Dude. I think this is so unbelievably WONKY but I did what I could with it. I'm pretty amused by it. *guh*

Zoe/Wash should be even stranger!

twilight_mash January 16 2006, 10:54:24 UTC

Amusing's good!

Oh man it would be!

nelladarren January 16 2006, 11:38:47 UTC

"There's coffee in the coffee"
and
"“Was there something wrong with the old way?” he said."
Priceless!
I love these games - I've been looking forward to doing something like that with the smut table, actually - like, not one story each word but one word each sentence...
This piece here is great! :o)

nelladarren January 16 2006, 17:28:55 UTC

Thanks, Christine. I'm looking forward to the smut table, too! :D

kimbari January 16 2006, 17:29:29 UTC

Guh! That was me! LOL

oldfashionedgrl January 16 2006, 12:44:01 UTC

This was great. I've never tried anything like this, don't know that I could make any sense of it. Great job. I'd just be copying at this point, but nelladarren named my favorite lines. Oh and “I wish I had flowers to give you... roses."

docladyblade January 16 2006, 17:08:27 UTC

I agree with the above. Those are great lines.

But I want to add:
She grimly stuck a finger into the hot liquid and fished whatever it was out, hoping it hadn't made any deposits while it was in there.
ROFL Thanks, Kim.

kimbari January 16 2006, 17:31:06 UTC

Yeah, I got REALLY creative with the word DUTY, didn't I? ROFL

altitudeandwine January 16 2006, 20:57:29 UTC

Yes, that one had me cackling inanely too (not that I suppose you would be cackling Sandy) as it turned my attention to how fixated Kim is on droppings and other anal thoughts these day, being peed on by her cavia and all, and how lucky we were that this was the only line with excrements in it in this very creative exercise :)

Oh, you here to Kim?
*smooches*
I bet that was fun to do.
I never read 50 first lines that created a story like this before
Brava!

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song_ofdevotion January 16 2006, 13:45:24 UTC

this is so great!!!

kimbari January 16 2006, 17:31:30 UTC

Thank you, dear! :)

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kimbari January 16 2006, 17:32:02 UTC

Thanks mj! Yeah, I WAS hard, but at least it's done. *pats self on back*