On the Fifth Day.

Dec 30, 2008 20:42

Title: Nothing
Fandom: Death Note (Live Action Movie)
Rating: PG
Summary: Sayu wants to comfort her brother but doesn't know how.

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harry potter, jyu oh sei, lycoris, doctor who, house, death note, day 5

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versipellis December 30 2008, 21:06:11 UTC
I...

oh, GODS! Oh, Cuddy (who I barely even know but that doesn't matter) - that's awful! Gods, such a well-done little vignette, I love the detail about the notes on the door and Ryuk's voice by her ear. Arrrrrgh!

The fourth one is also terribly moving - it feels very Doctor-like, it's really got that quality to it of fascination with humans and the poignancy is terribly sad.

The third one is lovely - I love that it's positive but terribly sad too. I love Andromeda's sentiment and the way that they had happy moments too.

The second one is really poignant because of the thing about being useful, or not - that's really moving.

And the first one makes me want to strangle Raito. Which you probably expected. I love Sayu's attempts to comfort; they're very sweet. Raito doesn't deserve them.

I think your choice of them for today broke me :S

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lycoris January 2 2009, 22:06:25 UTC
*hugs* I'd feel more guilty about traumatising you if you hadn't done it to me first! *nods* I'm glad that you liked them! :) I loved the Death Note/House one - la_localfreak and I were discussing is and the fic blossomed and I was pleased with it. In a terrible way.

*hugs the Doctor gently* Whoops?

I'm so glad the third one worked - I had a bit of trouble with that one but it seemed to come out okay in the end so yay! *nods*

*grins* It's always fun to make you want to strangle Raito. Because he always deserves it. Oh yes. *nods*

*hugs* Oh good, we can be broken together.

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lycoris January 2 2009, 23:28:24 UTC
Raito is a dick. We know this already. He's an utter dick. *cuddles Sayu*

I'm glad that you liked them and there was suitable creepiness. :) Thank you!

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la_localfreak December 31 2008, 14:10:25 UTC
OMG Cuddy with a death note- just as we discussed! Awesome (and also makes me cry, but that's a good thing) Oh, and poor Wilson too. *snuggles him*

I really like them all, you are magnificently good at angst :) and I love the angsty-healing exchange between Andromeda and Harry :D

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lycoris January 2 2009, 23:35:24 UTC
*grins* I thank you for helping me with the idea very much, it was pleasing! :) *pats for making you cry* I'm glad you like the angst!

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sabethea December 31 2008, 18:25:17 UTC
But the thing was, he sometimes forgot. Sometimes he forgot that humans were so fragile, so easily killed.

Oh. Wah.

And Andromeda being very like I imagine her, and that last one is just AWFUL. Oh.

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lycoris January 2 2009, 23:35:48 UTC
*hugs* I'm glad you liked them in a very distressed sort of way. Thank you.

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