sin título part 2/?

Jul 18, 2009 00:53


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Title: sin título part 2/?

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Rating: almost R/18 or one level above the previous chapter in explicitness.

Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. Written with great respect to the actors who ( Read more... )

i'm still sad how about you?, it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, ficity fic, lhdp

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calleighsgirl July 18 2009, 12:43:50 UTC
wow, your writing is truly amazing.
I hope to read more from you soon.

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12avocados July 18 2009, 17:35:02 UTC
Thank you for the compliment! I will try to write more.

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kiarcheo July 18 2009, 16:14:39 UTC
* standing open-mouthed* This. Was. Amazing.
You are really a talented writer, not everybody can pull out of the hat a descriptive chapter like this (I usually tend to skip that *blush ashamed* but this was so captiving and so not boring...)
Can't wait for the next chapter

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12avocados July 18 2009, 17:41:08 UTC
Thank you for the nice comment! I am finding the writing cathartic and looking at it as a few hours of post-trauma therapy. I feel like Silvia would think more descriptively and emotionally than Pepa would, so I tried to have this chapter reflect that.

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12avocados July 19 2009, 21:28:55 UTC
There is so much writing to read in the past few days! I'll have to go back through the posts because I think I've missed some. I hope people keep writing and it's not just a short temporary thing.

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lovelyafterglow July 18 2009, 20:24:12 UTC
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Please continue as soon as you can!

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12avocados July 19 2009, 21:29:23 UTC
Thank you! I think I'll do another chapter of this one tomorrow.

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lenageek July 19 2009, 04:37:05 UTC
Ye gods, that was some amazing writing! I love how this chapter is from Silvia's POV and how tender they are towards each other in taking care of one another. Please write more, I'm loving this! As I commented earlier, I was reading this during a class when I wasn't supposed to, that's how eager I was for new chapters! :D

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12avocados July 19 2009, 21:31:20 UTC
Thank you! I think I write better from Silvia's POV, but I'll switch back for the next one.

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