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sin título part 2/?

Jul 18, 2009 00:53

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Title: sin título part 2/?

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Rating: almost R/18 or one level above the previous chapter in explicitness.

Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. Written with great respect to the actors who ( Read more... )

i'm still sad how about you?, it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, ficity fic, lhdp

Comments 32

raven_bard July 18 2009, 05:33:00 UTC

Gods you're good. What superb writing skills you have. I totally teared up reading this. Poor Silvia, how guilty she must feel. I loved how you recounted the first time they made love. It was beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this with us. And more soon please!

12avocados July 18 2009, 17:21:04 UTC

Thank you! I'll try to write more this weekend. :)

booglebee July 18 2009, 05:42:09 UTC

I normally don't comment. Usually when I read these fics on livejournal I'm never logged in and say to myself that later when I log in I will comment, but I never do. I'm attempting to change that now.

Just letting your know that I really love this story that you have started. The way you have written each of Pepa's and Silvia's thoughts is beautiful, and I can just imagine them thinking that way.
This makes me feel so much better about the whole situation!
Keep up the good work!

12avocados July 18 2009, 17:23:02 UTC

Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you like the story! I didn't think I'd get such response and it's good to hear. :)

jeepy91 July 18 2009, 07:03:52 UTC

I really loved the flashback to when they first made love. Reading that invoked such tenderness. You're quickly healing up the ache that the episode left in my little fangirl heart. Thank you!

12avocados July 18 2009, 17:25:00 UTC

Thanks! I have that little scene mostly written out too. Maybe I'll post that next between chapters of this story. I'm trying to heal myself by writing. It's good therapy. :)

mmm_kekse July 18 2009, 07:40:15 UTC

again that was so beautiful! and so emotional and I'm trying really hard not to cry right now. thank you for writing and sharing and hope there will be many more parts <3

12avocados July 18 2009, 17:44:21 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm going to write more.

rocky_fan July 18 2009, 08:20:24 UTC

I wish I had your writing skills!!!!

Great chapter!

12avocados July 18 2009, 17:27:12 UTC

Thank you for commenting! I don't think my skills are all that great, but I just had to write something.

rocky_fan July 18 2009, 22:34:59 UTC

Belive me they are that great;-)