Fandom: Princess Tutu, Pairing: Fakir/Ahiru

[serika_san]

Title: Guiding Lights - (Short fic)
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Comments

[elektra3]

Aw, these are great! I love your characterization. One minor spelling error, though:

But I must say, you both compliment each other so very well.

It should be complement, not compliment.

[serika_san]

Still getting used to writing them. :x But it's fun, anyway.

Oh, and thanks! :D I work with wordpad and don't have a spell-checker, so... XD;

I'll change that now. ^^ Thanks again for pointing it out.

[serika_san]

Thank you for your continued feedback. ^^ I really appreciate it! I'll do my best to keep up with my community involvement (and hope some others will get the inspiration/motivation to get involved, as well).

[athena799]

Hehe, I'm really enjoying these. However, I believe that there were cameras because in episode 3 (or is it 4?) Ebine-san has a bunch of what appear to be photos of herself and her husband.

[serika_san]

Aw, rats. You're right. :/ That detail completely slipped by me. ._.;

[hakuchou_san]

Awww!!! These are sooo cute! I loved them, especially the last one, it was so sweet! You're a very good writer! *looks at serika_san with envy*

[serika_san]

Thank you for the feedback. ^_^ It's keeping me busy, and it's fun. I'm hoping to improve my writing and characterization as I go along. Still new to this fandom. :x

(aplause)

[hakuchou_san]

very well done! i think this is my favorite ficlette! you still
kept Fakir's personality.and ahiru was captured so perfectly!
(oh!and i have seen that picture.it's one of my favorites!^_^)

TTF12 ^_^

Re: (aplause)

[serika_san]

Thank you. ^^

Trying to keep them in character is hard sometimes, since writing often starts to take a life of its own.

Glad you enjoyed them, though! :D