[Drabble] The Truth in the Lies {Lost}

Sep 08, 2010 10:21

TITLE: The Truth in the Lies
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy

CHARACTER: Juliet Burke
GENRE: gen, angst
RATING: 
G
WORD COUNT: 
108
SUMMARY: Juliet can't take Ben's lies anymore ... Written for prompt #49 "Lie" for lost_in_108 and prompt #071 "Lies" for 100_tales.

WARNING: English still isn't my native language (although I wish) and the story is not beta'd.
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{community} lost_in_108, {fandom} lost, {format} drabble, {community} 100_tales, {feature} juliet burke

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lormats September 8 2010, 12:40:48 UTC
:( poor my dear Jules, right now *hate Ben* (I think I only hated Ben for the way he behaved with Juliet, and I wasn't a big fan of Juliet then)

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nicis_anatomy September 8 2010, 18:39:15 UTC
I was really mean to her :( But besides that ... I kinda liked him. Especially, when he was fooling everyone down in the hatch *g*
But I felt bad for Juliet right from the start and I will never forgive him for what he did to her.

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lormats September 8 2010, 18:55:33 UTC
that's one of the things that bugged me during the end (and I mean, and TBH the first time I watch the end I scream to my TV and went bananas... what the hell does the plane wreck means while the credits roll) The second time I watch it (within a few hours) I calm myself down and was like...ok I get it know and it's beautiful... But it keeps bugging me that we didn't have a Ben/Juliet closure, their relationship was really intense and she got to move on with the rest of the losties and he didn't because he still had to figure things out... one of them wouldn't have been Ben saying sorry or at least something to Juliet? He was an ass to her and after season 4 it was like whatever they never knew each other and Ben was never
in love obsessed with her BTW team darlton what did Ben feel when he learned Juliet was dead? huge question...
OK I got a little philosphical here...

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anna_salem September 8 2010, 13:42:18 UTC
I love Juliet, and especially the complex relationship she has with Ben. Great job.

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nicis_anatomy September 8 2010, 18:40:27 UTC
Thank you ;) I liked their relationship, too. He was pretty mean and I felt sorry for her, but it was also interesting to see them interact.

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nicis_anatomy September 12 2010, 16:19:29 UTC
Thank you very much ;) I wanted to include more of these exclamation marks, but I only had 108 words ... I'm glad it worked this way, too.

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pann_cake September 13 2010, 01:55:47 UTC
Poor Juliet. Season 3 was rough for her (until she got to kiss Jack, hee). Ben is such a great character, and I always loved to hate him, but his obsession with Juliet (and killing her boyfriend) was just creepy. Makes them fun to write about though.

(I wrote them for this prompt too and hadn't even read yours yet!)

:P

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nicis_anatomy September 13 2010, 10:54:49 UTC
It was :( But then Jack came and saved her and everything was good for a while (and then later again). And without Ben they would never have met, and James and Juliet would never realized they were soulmates ... so I guess, Ben had his purpose and we should like him for this (at least, a bit).

And you are right. They are fun to write ;)

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irishunicorn03 September 14 2010, 23:52:46 UTC
Very awesome drabble. I've always loved their interaction.

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nicis_anatomy September 15 2010, 07:29:27 UTC
I loved them, too. Thank you ;) I'm glad you liked it.

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