Thanks again for all your comments!
I've changed the paragraphing of dialogue in a few places (as compared to the original Japanese), to make it clearer who's speaking when. People say 'Eh?' a lot in this part, heh.
lady39jane has also uploaded scans for the first (
part 1,
part 2) and
third stories in the collection, if anyone else would like to try
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