Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond - Chapter 8

[wyntermute]

As I write, I always have a terrible fear that someday a real-life version of the fictional character Tom Lynn will appear and leave me his classic comment:

Sentimental Drivel.

With that said...

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond
Fandom: Naruto
Type: Multi-chaptered
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings: Deidara/Sakura
Word count: 3,291

Comments

*SQUEE*

[alory_shannon]

(I'm thinking in run-on sentences right now because I'm so excited that you updated but I'll try to cut them down somewhat but it'll be kinda hard.)

Gosh, I don't even know where to start. The whole chapter makes me ridiculously happy--I'm grinning like an idiot, and my cheeks are really starting to hurt.

As always, the character interaction is so realistic...it's just wonderful. I adore it.

Sakura's reaction to the hand mouth "kiss" was funny (I loved the mouths mouths mouths chant, heehee), but then The Kiss... -^_____^- HOMG, yes. Yes yes yes. And maybe half of a finally in there, too, even though I honestly think the pacing is great.
The fact that she punches him out again afterward (even though the kiss wasn't over the top and she enjoyed it even if she won't admit it to herself) was excellent too. :D
(I wonder what Dei's thinking after that 'harmless' little kiss...)

My only complaint would be that it wasn't long enough, but then again, I never think the chapters of my very favourite stories are long enough. XD

(And there is so much more I want to say about how wonderful this story is and how much I love it, but I'm still fairly incoherent at the moment, so I'm just gonna go read this again.)

~ <3333 :D

Re: *SQUEE*

[wyntermute]

I'm so glad you liked the chapter! :D

I was really agonizing over how to pull off their first kiss... And I didn't want to make it something sappy and romantic. Glad that the resulting idea sufficed. ;)