As I write, I always have a terrible fear that someday a real-life version of the fictional character Tom Lynn will appear and leave me his classic comment:
Sentimental Drivel.
With that said...
Title: Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond
Fandom: Naruto
Type: Multi-chaptered
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings: Deidara/Sakura
Word count: 3,291
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Gosh, I don't even know where to start. The whole chapter makes me ridiculously happy--I'm grinning like an idiot, and my cheeks are really starting to hurt.
As always, the character interaction is so realistic...it's just wonderful. I adore it.
Sakura's reaction to the hand mouth "kiss" was funny (I loved the mouths mouths mouths chant, heehee), but then The Kiss... -^_____^- HOMG, yes. Yes yes yes. And maybe half of a finally in there, too, even though I honestly think the pacing is great ( ... )
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I was really agonizing over how to pull off their first kiss... And I didn't want to make it something sappy and romantic. Glad that the resulting idea sufficed. ;)
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Your description is lovely and it seems like Deidara and Sakura are finally getting somewhere. Their interaction and characters are top-notch, as usual, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you. <33
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Amazing chapter, as usual!
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These two and their pairing _always_ need love. :P
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