Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond - Chapter 8

Aug 30, 2007 23:40

As I write, I always have a terrible fear that someday a real-life version of the fictional character Tom Lynn will appear and leave me his classic comment:

Sentimental Drivel.

With that said...

Title: Somewhere I Have Never Travelled, Gladly Beyond
Fandom: Naruto
Type: Multi-chaptered
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings: Deidara/Sakura
Word count: 3,291
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*SQUEE* alory_shannon August 31 2007, 05:18:38 UTC
(I'm thinking in run-on sentences right now because I'm so excited that you updated but I'll try to cut them down somewhat but it'll be kinda hard.)

Gosh, I don't even know where to start. The whole chapter makes me ridiculously happy--I'm grinning like an idiot, and my cheeks are really starting to hurt.

As always, the character interaction is so realistic...it's just wonderful. I adore it.

Sakura's reaction to the hand mouth "kiss" was funny (I loved the mouths mouths mouths chant, heehee), but then The Kiss... -^_____^- HOMG, yes. Yes yes yes. And maybe half of a finally in there, too, even though I honestly think the pacing is great ( ... )

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Re: *SQUEE* wyntermute September 3 2007, 22:50:09 UTC
I'm so glad you liked the chapter! :D

I was really agonizing over how to pull off their first kiss... And I didn't want to make it something sappy and romantic. Glad that the resulting idea sufficed. ;)

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korinacaffeine August 31 2007, 07:05:42 UTC
Wow, you UPDATED! I'm so happy! 8DD

Your description is lovely and it seems like Deidara and Sakura are finally getting somewhere. Their interaction and characters are top-notch, as usual, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you. <33

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wyntermute September 3 2007, 22:50:28 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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UR AWESOME BAKK korinacaffeine December 8 2007, 04:29:20 UTC
OMG OMG OMG! U KNO HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE BEEN READIN THIS STORY OVER AN OVER AGAIN?!!?!!?!?1!LIKE 100! EVERYTIME I FINNISH READIN THE FIRST TIME I START AGAIN! I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON! I LOVE IT, RIGHT NOW OUT OF EVERY STORY I HAVE READ...URZ IS THE BEST! plz update soon, or i will go insane...an one more thing it is amazing how u got the personalites to caputar them so perfect, itz awesome, an u are awesome at the fighting/ battle scenes. Plz plz plz im begging you update soon

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Re: UR AWESOME BooKK korinacaffeine December 8 2007, 04:30:00 UTC
Sorry i messed up, i ment to put awesome BOOK

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pure_rhapsody August 31 2007, 14:26:24 UTC
OMG! An update! Just when I fell out of love for this pairing, the love has been rekindled! :D

Amazing chapter, as usual!

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wyntermute September 3 2007, 22:50:54 UTC
Thank you!

These two and their pairing _always_ need love. :P

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AWESOMENESS! anonymous December 8 2007, 04:31:00 UTC
plz update soon

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