*More* Story.

[wolfbanes_song]

"We found this on your neck," he said, handing it to me. "Say, now that you’re awake, maybe you could tell us about it." I took it from him, holding it in my hands. It was a star; looked like silver. This... used to be mine, once...

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[lassie_faire]

Gugh.

What about STEVE? What's gonna happen to STEVEEEE?!?!

And um, what happened to her? Seriously, you're not giving me much to go on here. *grumble*

To remedy this, you need to write more.

[wolfbanes_song]

Well first, who said she isn't interested? But seeing as Atya and Marianne said essentially all they know about it, and she's still in no condition to go anywhere, what difference would it make at this moment (and who said I was narrating everything that went on in her mind)? And she woke up knowing she was pregnant like she woke up knowing about V's apartment and so forth. These facts didn't startle her because it was a condition-based set of memories she'd experienced over time. How she got pregnant, however, would have been a specific memory, much easier to forget. With this in mind, does it still not make sense, or does it clarify

[wolfbanes_song]

Well, for one, her patterns of memory aren't *supposed* to be in the story, because it's not even something she herself necessarily understands (so, I've given you an outside perspective of what she's going through, which maybe I should have held off on). I suppose I could put in more about how she's feeling about finding things out.. *shrug* It's funny, you telling *me* to be clearer about things.

Anyway, good. Saturday it will be.

[feistymango]

It seems like she should be more concerned/interested in her surroundings and how they found her. Also, what happened at the council, Atya convinced her to go why? Wouldn't she have miscarried by now with all the stress and lack of food and drugs?