Constructive Feedback - last_imperatrix (+ note on sundays)

Mar 16, 2010 18:10

Title: Constructive Feedback
Author: last_imperatrix
Pairing: TOP/Taeyang
Rating: NC-17 "(for language, awkward hard-ons, and catalogued fanfic sex tropes)."
Genre: Romance, Humor
Wordcount: 5,059
Summary: "Youngbae has a plan, and fandom is his research. Seunghyun has Youngbae’s notes, and absolutely no clue."
Don't let the first few lines fool you!

This fic is hilarious. Youngbae uses fanfiction as his guide in gaining Seunghyun's affections. He's got notes, color-coded ones that are tabbed and bound and ready for his use, and then they're swiped by Seunghyun, who (naturally) sits on them by accident. The badfic scattered throughout the beginning is funny (as is Youngbae's "review" of it), and the interaction between the two reads very naturally to me. They're boyish and kind of clumsy as they dance around the subject and each other, which is exactly what I'd expect of them; the explicit scenes are earthy and real. The writing style is light and funny without veering too far into crack.

I'd like to see more of this pairing. :)

Note on Sundays: we missed last week, as we've been trying to establish a schedule where all of us can get on at the same time and share recs. We'll either catch up sometime during this week, or just go onto next week's theme. Thanks.

length: oneshot, artist: big bang, rating: nc-17, author: last_imperatrix, reccer: bearbricked, pairing: top/taeyang

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