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I need help proof reading my invites as well as making sure they sound ok, please!
So here is the wording so far. The one thing I was wondering is since my fiance is paying for most of the wedding along with a little help from my mom and grandparents is the beginging wording ok? My fiance liked it because he says we're celebrating with them.
Together with their families and friends
Janel >>>>
and
Mario >>>>>
Request the honor of you presence
At their marriage ceremony
On Saturday the thirteenth of August
Two Thousand and Eleven
A half past three
In the afternoon
Oak Park Community Center
Address (I'll fill this in on the actual invite)
Oak Park, CA
Reception
Immediately to follow
Also I wasnt sure if I capitalized in all the right places?
And alst my question about time...we want our ceremony to start at 4 pm, but everyone keeps saying if we put 4 on the invite everyone will be late.
Also, I put reception immediately to follow....our ceremony and reception are in the same local. We're not doing a traditional cocktail hour, just a few snacks out while guests get seated and then we'll come in after about 20-30 minutes (we're doing all photos before the wedding). So would that wording be appropriate?
Thanks so much everyone!
Edit: also I just realized we're getting response cards included. How did you word yours? Anything cute or a little different?
And if our wedding is on August 13th, what date do I need to have listed on the response cards?
So here is the wording so far. The one thing I was wondering is since my fiance is paying for most of the wedding along with a little help from my mom and grandparents is the beginging wording ok? My fiance liked it because he says we're celebrating with them.
Together with their families and friends
Janel >>>>
and
Mario >>>>>
Request the honor of you presence
At their marriage ceremony
On Saturday the thirteenth of August
Two Thousand and Eleven
A half past three
In the afternoon
Oak Park Community Center
Address (I'll fill this in on the actual invite)
Oak Park, CA
Reception
Immediately to follow
Also I wasnt sure if I capitalized in all the right places?
And alst my question about time...we want our ceremony to start at 4 pm, but everyone keeps saying if we put 4 on the invite everyone will be late.
Also, I put reception immediately to follow....our ceremony and reception are in the same local. We're not doing a traditional cocktail hour, just a few snacks out while guests get seated and then we'll come in after about 20-30 minutes (we're doing all photos before the wedding). So would that wording be appropriate?
Thanks so much everyone!
Edit: also I just realized we're getting response cards included. How did you word yours? Anything cute or a little different?
And if our wedding is on August 13th, what date do I need to have listed on the response cards?