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timehasa_way

Keeping Up Appearances

Sep 26, 2009 21:48

Title: Keeping Up Appearances
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki
Prompt: 005. Outsides.
fanfic100 table: here
Word Count: 5,995
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Lots of man smex. And language. Schmoopy cuddles.
Summary: There are reasons why Jared is the way he is on the outside. He doesn't keep many secrets, but he can be a lot more insecure ( Read more... )

nc-17, spn rps, j2, fanfic100

Comments 68

oberon_titania September 27 2009, 03:24:56 UTC

GUH. i don't even think i have the words for a coherent reply right now. that was HOT. and sweet, and touching and pooooor jared. i really wanted to give him a hug. i'm glad we've got jensen to do it for us ;)
you're right, sex absoutely makes everything better. it is hard to write insecure!jared, and i think that you've done it perfectly here. the little details were excellent, like how he had his hands on his chest when trying to talk to jensen.
and so hot. so hot. i need a cold shower now.
the whole thing was just lovely :)

timehasa_way September 27 2009, 06:05:11 UTC

Wow, thank you so much!! Glad you liked it! :D

Enjoy your shower! XD

trinipedia September 27 2009, 04:20:56 UTC

I think I just cried.

God, babes, just.

I can't even form a thought.

Jared was so-and Jensen-God.

timehasa_way September 27 2009, 06:05:44 UTC

Awww, sweetie!! *HUGS*

ILU! ♥

dugindeep September 27 2009, 08:05:20 UTC

Ummm, I dunno Jess. I'm not big on toppy!Jared :-P ( ... )

timehasa_way September 27 2009, 18:16:53 UTC

Hahahaha, nice one! :P

Aww, thank you!! *hugs* This is actually completely different from the one I was talking about posting. Well, mostly. I kinda did it over and came out with this, and it's definitely a lot better. The first one I wrote was just...lol...yeah.

dugindeep September 27 2009, 18:21:04 UTC

HAHAH Well, then, either way, I really enjoyed this. At least the 'not so great' one brought you to this here :-D

macbyrne September 27 2009, 11:25:17 UTC

I adored this; my bulletproof kink is insecure!Jared; somehow you can't help but think someone that big would have feet of clay, and I love seeing him unsure and tentative. Beautifully done, between the flashbacks and the scene with him and Jensen. And omhg the sex was so freakin' HAWT!

timehasa_way September 27 2009, 18:17:47 UTC

Awesome, thank you so much!! :D

alvieramarisha September 27 2009, 15:00:01 UTC

Gosh...I don't know what to say.
This fic is truly so intimate and hot, but also so romantic.
The way Jensen tries to make Jared feels better...ohhh.... so romantic.
GREAT FIC !!!

timehasa_way September 27 2009, 18:18:19 UTC

Hee, thank you!! :)