A Better Father

[tifaching]

Title: A Better Father
Pairing: John/Dean
Genre: wincest
Rating: R
Word Count: 200
Summary:  Lots of things wouldn't happen if John was a better father.
Warnings:  parent/child incest, non-con,
A/N:  Birthday double drabble for the lovely

Comments

[ephermeralk]

ahhhhh. I love your words. I really, really do. The tension here in only 200 words is palpable, and I find myself on edge just as much as Dean here.

side note: Also, I realize I just put in my summergen author note that I liked John as a decent, non abusive guy, but that's only canon John

^that made me laugh. So thanks for that, too!

[tifaching]

Ungh, can you imagine him sitting there drinking with John and trying to pretend he doesn't know or care what's going to happen?

Hahaha, well I really do love good!daddy!John, so......

[a_phoenixdragon]

Ohhh, that is SO. DAMNED. WICKED.

No...I love it. That is just...YES.

THANK YOU.

*SQUISHES*

[tifaching]

Thank YOU, BB!

[herminekurotowa]

Eeek, what an asshole. *smacks John with a wooden spoon*

*has rolling pin ready for next time*

[tifaching]

LOL, I think a wrecking ball would be most appropriate. :)

[justmep2]

I usually like (or at least neutral about) John but you made me hate the guy in 200 hundred words.
AU, you said. Right. AU.

Very creepy, very dark. Loved it.

[tifaching]

I LOVE John and stories where he's a good father to the boys are some of my favorites. However, I also love a nasty dark AU (to me) John because I do. :)

Thanks!

[jj1564]

You did it! Thanks so much, it's perfect! Dark, disturbing and beautifully written, which is exactly what I love about your work. I thought this was bad daddy John leading Dean down the road to alcohol abuse then this line happened...

'A better father wouldn’t be planning to fuck his eldest through a sagging motel mattress in an hour or so, already half hard in anticipation of the boy’s choked back cries.'

Holy hell, that made my heart race! Very bad daddy!! You convey so much in so few words and John so possessive, controlling and menacing it's chilling. Thank you so much for my darkest birthday gift ever, I loved it!

[tifaching]

I did! LOL, when you said John and Father's Day I really did have good intentions, but then you said the magic word. "Dark" and my mind was off to the races.

So glad you enjoyed, hon!