I haven't commented before on this story, but I've been following it avidly since joining the community.
I absolutely love this chapter and the interactions between Natalie and Barricade. It adds further depth to both of them as characters. I've always seen dialogue as the best character building method out there.
Just one thing I saw that jumped out at me. Barricade mentions that there are three things making the situation ambiguous, yet only mentions two. What was the third?
The third thing is Barricade himself. Natalie was a little scared at this point, and he couldn’t really blame her on account of his being number three in the cause for ambiguity. <--See? ^_^
Oh, lovely, this is quite nice. The interactions here are just great, and I think Frenzy's starting to get a grip on how Nat and 'Cade's relationship is. I love it!
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I absolutely love this chapter and the interactions between Natalie and Barricade. It adds further depth to both of them as characters. I've always seen dialogue as the best character building method out there.
Just one thing I saw that jumped out at me. Barricade mentions that there are three things making the situation ambiguous, yet only mentions two. What was the third?
Good luck on finals!
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Okay, so just ignore my comment about that and enjoy the praise! :D
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just like a little old couple already...
i'll reread and review when I don't have to run for the bus
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"Oh, sweet Cybertron!"
"Ah, Barricade, fuck yes!"
"G-g-gross."
:)
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