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tellshannon815

Ana Get Your Gun

Aug 24, 2008 15:01

Title: Ana Get Your Gun
Fandom: Lost
Characters: Ana Lucia.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: i do not own these characters. They own me.
Summary: Four times Ana Lucia fired a gun, and one that she didn't.

( She had felt alive again when she fired a gun the first time after she was shot. Now she feels dead inside. )

lost: ana lucia cortez

Comments 4

ladylavinia August 24 2008, 18:46:14 UTC

"Gale told her that Goodwin hadn't been trying to kill her, that he thought she was a good person."

Makes me wonder how Ana-Lucia would feel if she had known that Ben was looking forward to her or any other of the Tailies killing Goodwin.

tellshannon815 August 25 2008, 12:34:16 UTC

Interesting, hadn't ever looked at it that way! Maybe some time I'll try and write something along those lines.

missy42 August 27 2008, 09:17:13 UTC

GAH! Oh, this was so good! So concise, too (I'm too detailed and wordy, so I really admire that in a writer). I definitely think this is a great study of Ana Lucia and the thoughts that would have been running through her head. And it just kept getting better and better. Here are some of my favourite bits ( ... )

tellshannon815 August 27 2008, 20:46:36 UTC

Thanks for reading and thanks for the feedback! it's always nice to meet someone who actually understands Ana and doesn't automatically hate her based on her first couple of appearances.