You know the drill!

I really need all the crit you can give me, so please help me out. Suggestions are appreciated greatly! 

[Guess what the camera flicks on to? Well, it's a rather worn out looking business man! Dark circles under his eyes, his suit's more than a bit wrinkled, and he's even slouching. You see, dear Sakano has been mourning the lost of his entire cast, wondering what sort of work he will do now. Makes sense, right ( Read more... )

[Long silence before there's some sort of sheepish, very-fake laughter. He's in so much trouble sob.]

So you really do come back...

Is everyone alright?

[ooc: Yup Sakano's back! ...And all of you who read his death thread, you're horrible for laughing.

Except not really.]

[BZZZZZZT. The communicator turns on to audio with that shock, and there's a scream of "UWAH" as Sakano promptly drops the thing. He picks it up quickly.]

I'd forgotten we needed to use this... Is everyone alright?! Mr. President, how are you doing?! I've been trying to find a weapon, but...

[He pauses, glances around (though you can't see that ( Read more... )

[Annnd the video clicks on to a very stressed looking business man. He seems to be leaning against the wall of a building of some sort, looking exhausted, stressed (as usual), and nervous. He has so much work to do! How to appear like he's trying to get that done without letting the President see him in obvious danger?]I-is anyone near the shopping ( Read more... )

[For a moment there's some clicking and you might even hear some panicked whispering.

Soon the whispering becomes more of a speaking. A fretful speaking.]

Seguchi-san will fire me for sure!! Ahhhh, how could I have left!? Of course it was not by my choice, but...

Oh, is it working?

[There's a brief pause of silence aside from the carefully paced ( Read more... )

D-D-D-D-D-DEAD!!! THEY'RE DEAD! WHAT AM I TO DO ABOUT THIS?!

[Yup, you guessed it. The video turns on to a desperate and upset Sakano. He's gripping the communicator so much that it's trembling just the slightest. Not like you can tell-- he's pacing madly, and when he finally sets the thing down, he starts screaming and spinning around the room and ( Read more... )

[The camera turns on immediately stable. Sakano's sitting there in his usual business suit, a few papers stacked neatly around him and his suitcase laying off to the side.]

Ah.. there? Yes. Hello, I am Sakano from N-G Productions.. E-er, not that that matters here..

Ahem! The point being. Those of us from N-G Productions have decided that it would be ( Read more... )

[The video turns on to the sound of footsteps. Well, it's just audio for now, with the occasional flashes of light. It seems that the communicator is in the man's pocket as he paces the room.]It's been a week, hasn't it? A week stuck in this place! That means it's too late for it to be a dream! Or even a nightmare! I would have preferred a ( Read more... )

[As the camera clicks on, the video is shaky. You might catch sight of that dark haired, glasses-wearing business man. And if you do, you'll notice his face is absolutely horrified, and he's shaking insanely. Now he's staring down at the screen.]

Hello?! Is this thing on? It's like a cell phone, right?.. [Well, he hoped so. It seemed to be like that ( Read more... )