Watchmen fic: To Relinquish

[scarlet_carsons]

Title: To Relinquish

Comments

[sandoz_iscariot]

Oh, ouch. (Good ouch.) Your fics always make me feel like a wuss for writing 60s Buddy Cop Dan/Rorschach, but I mean that absolutely in a good way. You take no prisoners.

[scarlet_carsons]

Well, to be honest, I actually prefer 60s homoerotic buddy cop hijinks... but, erm, sometimes I just feel like making my OTP do horrible things to each other.

[quietprofanity]

I think I read through this whole fanfic making embarrassing noises of one stripe or another. Like "unf" and then "eeep!" and then "owwwie!!!" and then "Noooo." Um, is that a proper review? I hope it is.

So hardcore. It's great. I like the precum on the cheek. Ouch. :-X

[scarlet_carsons]

I think I read through this whole fanfic making embarrassing noises of one stripe or another.

Haha, good. I'm still a bit 'wtf did I just write?' about it.

Thanks. I had to fight my inner prude to write it.

[raffi]

...

Wow.

I haven't read any Dan/Ror fics in quite a while and I thought 'why not? This should be interesting!' and this was just... so hardcore. ♥

[scarlet_carsons]

Thanks. :D

[findmyantidrug]

I've been trying to comment on this since it's been posted, and I can't summon anything more coherent than 'hnngghhh owowow' Augh. That conversation when they're having sex...! And the angry fighting and oh, dear. Fantastic.

[scarlet_carsons]

'Hnngghhh owowow' is a good response, though! So thanks. >:D

[radishface]

This was so straightforward and bare-bones, and really suited the disillusionment they're both feeling in that moment. I think the unembellished nature of it really made it creepy... probably the first time I've read a D/R that didn't come across as sexy; my face was just like D: the whole time.

[scarlet_carsons]

Thank you! We aim for creepy.

Man one day I need to write a fic where the characters have sex that's happy and hot. But where's the fun in that?