Saterday Night Lafeeva

[robuste_maximum]

hey HEY!
made a new song.
think its missing something.
need a little constructive critisism.
www.myspace.com/donpainandthetechincolornichgtmareband

wish i could play the piano well.

Tom keeps saying he needs some "slice" (women) i think i'll take him to grand rapids and sign him up for the "Man Auction"

yeah, he'd like that.

either way, critisize.